VO-BB - 20 YEARS OLD! Forum Index VO-BB - 20 YEARS OLD!
Established November 10, 2004
 
 FAQFAQ   SearchSearch   MemberlistMemberlist   UsergroupsUsergroups   RegisterRegister 
 ProfileProfile   Log in to check your private messagesLog in to check your private messages   Log inLog in 

okay, just now joined....ready for CRITIQUES

 
Post new topic   Reply to topic    VO-BB - 20 YEARS OLD! Forum Index -> Critique
View previous topic :: View next topic  
Author Message
Kevgarlic



Joined: 13 Sep 2011
Posts: 12
Location: Southern Illinois

PostPosted: Tue Sep 13, 2011 3:57 pm    Post subject: okay, just now joined....ready for CRITIQUES Reply with quote

Hi Fellow vo collegues, my name is Kevin, a free-lance audio guy living in southern Illinois, who just this day became an official member.

*A current member of your website, Todd Ellis suggested this website to me.
Thanks Todd.

For the last 16 years I have been working in television, in the operations department of a major Public Television Station, BUT my first
and real passion is radio. Before I came to TV I was a DJ for 14 years and I love doing voice-work - of any kind.

This past spring I graduated with my Masters' Degree in Professional Media production. (*My thesis was a 15-minute
AUDIO documentary about the sounds and stories of the Shawnee National Forest here in southern Illinois. This audio piece was
aired on the local Public radio station)

I currently do vos for the one of the local tv stations and for the local cable company. In addition, I also read newspapers for the local
sight-impaired radio service and work on nature-centered audio documentaries.

Below is my website so you can hear my vo work. Yes, I know that my website is pretty basic, BUT, since I'm a creative vo guy, I'd rather use my energies on creating the best audio that I can.

http://www.boucherproductions.com/

So, this posting is to "introduce" myself to you all and ask you to critique my work so that I may improve in this fascinating field.

Like many of you who are ALREADY doing this full time, one day I hope to make a living FULL-TIME with my voice. (*I'm currently working on several nature-themed audio documentaries)

Regards,

Kev Garlic
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message Send e-mail Visit poster's website
Bruce
Boardmeister


Joined: 06 Jun 2005
Posts: 7977
Location: Portland, OR

PostPosted: Tue Sep 13, 2011 4:33 pm    Post subject: Re: okay, just now joined....ready for CRITIQUES Reply with quote

Kevgarlic wrote:
*A current member of your website, Todd Ellis suggested this website to me.


Todd can be so mean sometimes....subjecting you to our madness.

Well Kevin, let me talk about your website briefly. I'd study a few more professional VO websites and pick up some cues from there. Simple is fine, but there are no demos to click on or to download from your site. All you have is two TV promos and a commercial automatically play when people land on your site. The majority here are against auto playing audio. Long story, but believe me.

It sounds like you could use two demos available to play on your landing page presuming these are the things you like to do.....TV/Radio Promos/Imaging, and Commercials.

Your delivery is pleasant and with some further training and practice you can achieve more of a major market or national sound.

Watch your audio levels too. The car commercial was recorded so hot that it distorted a bit in one spot. Using compression can keep your levels more, well, level, and can give your reads a fuller, richer sound.

I've got more I could suggest, but I'll let others take it from here.

B
_________________
VO-BB Member #31 Enlisted June, 2005

I'm not a Zoo, but over the years I've played one on radio/TV. .
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message Send e-mail Visit poster's website
Fran McClellan
The Thirteenth Floor


Joined: 15 Feb 2010
Posts: 1314
Location: Middle of Nowhere, PA

PostPosted: Tue Sep 13, 2011 6:58 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Welcome to the VO-BB, Kev!!
_________________
Back into the murky lurk from whence I came
--
"Life is what happens to you while you're busy making other plans." - John Lennon
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message Send e-mail Visit poster's website
todd ellis
A Zillion


Joined: 02 Jan 2007
Posts: 10528
Location: little egypt

PostPosted: Tue Sep 13, 2011 7:22 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

hi kevin - glad you came! you will get the unvarnished truth here - for better or worse, but usually better. check the archives too ... lots in there.
_________________
"i know philip banks": todd ellis
who's/on/1st?

Back to top
View user's profile Send private message Send e-mail Visit poster's website
Mike Sommer
A Hundred Dozen


Joined: 05 May 2008
Posts: 1222
Location: Boss Angeles

PostPosted: Tue Sep 13, 2011 10:00 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Hmm went to website- found no demo - heard no demo.

So lets talk a bout the website.

It might be best to point out that your website is often the first and only contact people have with you. So it needs to make a good first impression.

Since you say you are a creative guy, I'll have to take your word on that because the website does not reflect that.

You don't need to spend thousands of dollars on logos and crazy design, but you do need to make it look like you're professional and have it all together- that you mean business. This is advertising, if you can not sell yourself, how do you expect anyone to believe you can sell them?

So it might be best to put a little more creative though into it.

Remember, presentations is everything.
_________________
The Blog:
http://voiceoveraudio.blogspot.com/

Acoustics are counter-intuitive. If one thing is certain about acoustics, it is that if anything seems obvious it is probably wrong.
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message
Scott Pollak
The Gates of Troy


Joined: 01 Jun 2010
Posts: 1903
Location: Looking out at the San Juan mountains

PostPosted: Wed Sep 14, 2011 4:30 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Guess I'll chime in, too. I went to the website and heard no demos. My first thought, honestly, when I saw the site was "ugggh!".

This is a business. Like any other. You're selling your services to professionals while you are competing against other professionals. If you are not professional in every aspect of your voiceover business, from your sound, to your presentation, to your communication and marketing, billing, follow-up, service, etc, then you'll lose. It really is that simple.

And to top it all off, there may not be a business MORE competitive than this.
_________________
Scott R. Pollak
Clients include Pandora, NPR Atlanta, Wells Fargo, Cisco, Humana, Publix, UPS, AT&T, HP, Xerox and more.

www.voicebyscott.com
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message Visit poster's website
Kevgarlic



Joined: 13 Sep 2011
Posts: 12
Location: Southern Illinois

PostPosted: Wed Sep 14, 2011 6:01 am    Post subject: Appreciate the input Reply with quote

Wow, I new I'd get some good advice .

**Todd, you were right on when you said the "unvarnished" truth!

Also thanks to Bob for the advice to add some compression to the vos...

So....looks like I WILL be beefing up the website then. No, actually drastically redesigning it is more like it.

And, my gut feeling told me that this IS a very competitive biz, I just needed somebody to remind me that, this is probably THE most competitive.

Well, I'm up for it.

Kevin
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message Send e-mail Visit poster's website
Scott Pollak
The Gates of Troy


Joined: 01 Jun 2010
Posts: 1903
Location: Looking out at the San Juan mountains

PostPosted: Wed Sep 14, 2011 7:31 pm    Post subject: Re: Appreciate the input Reply with quote

Kevgarlic wrote:


So....looks like I WILL be beefing up the website then. No, actually drastically redesigning it is more like it.



Kevin, unless you're a skilled graphic artist/web designer, then pay a pro to give you a professional site. After all, you wouldn't want THEM to voice their own spot now, would you? Wink
_________________
Scott R. Pollak
Clients include Pandora, NPR Atlanta, Wells Fargo, Cisco, Humana, Publix, UPS, AT&T, HP, Xerox and more.

www.voicebyscott.com
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message Visit poster's website
Chuck Davis
M&M


Joined: 02 Feb 2005
Posts: 2389
Location: Where I love to be...Between the Vineyards and the Cows.

PostPosted: Thu Sep 15, 2011 4:06 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Welcome Kev. I had the same experience with your site as most. Just the landing page...no audio.

You've got a long way to go....but lots of help and encouragement here in VO-BBland.
_________________
Wicked huge.....in India.
www.chuckdaviscreative.com
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message Send e-mail Visit poster's website
Bailey
4 Large


Joined: 04 Jun 2005
Posts: 4336
Location: Lake San Marcos... north of Connie, northwest of the Best.

PostPosted: Thu Sep 15, 2011 10:06 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Welcome to the VO-BB Kevin.

I prefer the varnished truth. Then I don't need a box of Kleenex when I read critiques.

Wink
_________________
"Bailey"
a.k.a. Jim Sutton
Retired... Every day is Saturday, except Sunday.
VO-BB Member #00044 W00T.gif" alt="W00T" border="0" />
AOVA Graduate 02/2004 ;
"Be a Voice, not an Echo."Ninja
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message
Kevgarlic



Joined: 13 Sep 2011
Posts: 12
Location: Southern Illinois

PostPosted: Thu Sep 15, 2011 10:06 am    Post subject: comments on docs Reply with quote

Thanks so far for all of the input - Specifically Scott, Chuck and Todd.

Here is something else for you guys - and gals - to critique.

This past Spring & Summer the regional NPR-affiliated radio station

aired three of my nature documentaries....just follow the links below...

Comments?? Good, bad ??

Kev Garlic

Links

Link: http://www.publicbroadcasting.net/wsiu/.jukebox?action=viewPodcast&podcastId=11623

My 3 pieces are the top three on the screen.
(1) Kevin Boucher, Owl Encounter
(2) Sounds & Stories of the Shawnee Forest Part 1
(3) Sounds & Stories of the Shawnee Forest Part 2
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message Send e-mail Visit poster's website
Gregory Best
The Gates of Troy


Joined: 04 Aug 2005
Posts: 1853
Location: San Diego area (east of Connie and south and east of Bailey)

PostPosted: Wed Sep 21, 2011 6:40 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

See if you can get email address from your webhosting provider under your url - e.g., Kevin@boucherproductions.com it would be much more professional than a yahoo or goolge email address.
_________________
Gregory Best

greg@gregorybest.com
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message Send e-mail Visit poster's website
Kevgarlic



Joined: 13 Sep 2011
Posts: 12
Location: Southern Illinois

PostPosted: Thu Sep 22, 2011 3:27 am    Post subject: e-mail Reply with quote

Hi Greg,

I have recently noticed that some e-mail addresses seem to be almost a copy of their respective websites...good tip, I'll check it out.

Thanks. Kevin
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message Send e-mail Visit poster's website
Yonie
CM


Joined: 31 Aug 2011
Posts: 906

PostPosted: Thu Sep 22, 2011 12:02 pm    Post subject: Re: e-mail Reply with quote

Kevgarlic wrote:


I have recently noticed that some e-mail addresses seem to be almost a copy of their respective websites.


Check your webhost. I got my current e-mail through mine.
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message Send e-mail
Display posts from previous:   
Post new topic   Reply to topic    VO-BB - 20 YEARS OLD! Forum Index -> Critique All times are GMT - 7 Hours
Page 1 of 1

 
Jump to:  
You cannot post new topics in this forum
You cannot reply to topics in this forum
You cannot edit your posts in this forum
You cannot delete your posts in this forum
You cannot vote in polls in this forum


Powered by phpBB © 2001, 2005 phpBB Group