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tokyofan
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PostPosted: Thu Sep 22, 2011 7:02 pm    Post subject: New website; commercial demo Reply with quote

I've had a new site up for a few months now and just updated the 'Commercial' demo (on the English page).
On the Japanese page, the CM demo has somewhat different spots (and durations). Any thoughts or impressions on the site or commercial demo would be appreciated!

http://www.chriskoprowski.com

Thx!
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Darren Altman
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PostPosted: Fri Sep 23, 2011 4:45 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

I think your commercial reel is great, very strong indeed. Incredibly well produced and good length clips that really show off your range. My only observation is, do you really want to start with a spot about fertiliser? If you do want to use it, stick it in the middle somewhere!

Congrats though, I think this is very strong.
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tokyofan
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PostPosted: Fri Sep 23, 2011 5:29 am    Post subject: re: Reply with quote

Thanks, Darren!
The 'fertilizer' spot was a real commercial I voiced which I thought was very well-produced...and so I decided to lead with it.
I hoped voice seekers would care more about the delivery, style, attitude, etc. than the content...but if the word 'fertilizer' sticks out too much maybe I need to use a different part of the spot or re-order things.

Is there a better spot to lead with? Hm.

Thanks again!
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