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Benjamin Stovall Been Here Awhile

Joined: 13 Dec 2011 Posts: 250 Location: Los Angeles, CA
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Posted: Tue Feb 14, 2012 8:51 pm Post subject: Back in Black |
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After getting some really good suggestions about how to improve my performance, I took those comments to heart, implemented them, and now I've finally got my official commercial demo and website up!
Take a gander if you have the time. Your feedback is always welcome. Special thanks to Bob Bergen and Scott Pollak. You guys helped me SO much. I can't tell you how grateful I am for your help!
http://www.benstovall.com |
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todd ellis A Zillion

Joined: 02 Jan 2007 Posts: 10529 Location: little egypt
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Posted: Wed Feb 15, 2012 7:22 am Post subject: |
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1. i can play your demo (and it's good)
2. i can contact you
i see nothing missing! love the simplicity! although i'm not sure why the redundant link on the header. when i mouse over it makes me thing i might go somewhere else. not a deal killer - but since it doesn't go anywhere - i'd take it off. _________________ "i know philip banks": todd ellis
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Bruce Boardmeister

Joined: 06 Jun 2005 Posts: 7977 Location: Portland, OR
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Posted: Wed Feb 15, 2012 7:40 am Post subject: |
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Ben, a very nice demo! Time to knock on some virtual doors.
B _________________ VO-BB Member #31 Enlisted June, 2005
I'm not a Zoo, but over the years I've played one on radio/TV. . |
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heyguido MMD

Joined: 31 Aug 2011 Posts: 2507 Location: RDU, the Geek Capitol of the South
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Posted: Wed Feb 15, 2012 8:20 am Post subject: |
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I'm with Bruce....
Go get 'em. _________________ Don Brookshire
"Wait.... They wanna PAY me for this?" |
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Benjamin Stovall Been Here Awhile

Joined: 13 Dec 2011 Posts: 250 Location: Los Angeles, CA
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Posted: Wed Feb 15, 2012 8:34 am Post subject: |
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Thanks guys! I wanted to get the pulse of the community before I dove full force into my marketing campaign. Unless someone finds something that needs fixing first, I plan on starting the marketing machine this coming Sunday night.
Todd, I removed that header link, as suggested. Good catch. |
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heyguido MMD

Joined: 31 Aug 2011 Posts: 2507 Location: RDU, the Geek Capitol of the South
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Posted: Wed Feb 15, 2012 8:36 am Post subject: |
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Nothin' there to be ashamed of....
Get it in front of the people you want to work for. _________________ Don Brookshire
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todd ellis A Zillion

Joined: 02 Jan 2007 Posts: 10529 Location: little egypt
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Posted: Wed Feb 15, 2012 9:37 am Post subject: |
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i would advise starting the marketing machine sunday night - then letting it warm up for a few days - send your marketing so it lands on a tuesday or wednesday mid-morning or early afternoon.
junk mail ("e" and snail) is most prevalent on monday mornings - don't risk being tossed in the trash with the rest of the cheap viagra & nigerian down-on-their-luck royalty letters.
for whatever reason - statistics show people are more receptive toward the middle of the week. _________________ "i know philip banks": todd ellis
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Scott Pollak The Gates of Troy

Joined: 01 Jun 2010 Posts: 1903 Location: Looking out at the San Juan mountains
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Posted: Wed Feb 15, 2012 10:29 am Post subject: |
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Yeah.
+1 to everything everyone else said.
Possibly THE simplest, most straight-forward site I've ever seen in my entire life.
I LIKE it! _________________ Scott R. Pollak
Clients include Pandora, NPR Atlanta, Wells Fargo, Cisco, Humana, Publix, UPS, AT&T, HP, Xerox and more.
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KaraEdwards M&M

Joined: 21 Feb 2007 Posts: 2374 Location: Behind a mic or camera, USA
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DougVox The Gates of Troy

Joined: 10 Jan 2007 Posts: 1706 Location: Miami
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Posted: Wed Feb 15, 2012 1:44 pm Post subject: |
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Really nice, Ben.
Though you might wanna correct the misspelling of "Edgy" at the top right. _________________ Doug Turkel (tur-KELL)
Voiceover UNnouncer®
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Benjamin Stovall Been Here Awhile

Joined: 13 Dec 2011 Posts: 250 Location: Los Angeles, CA
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Posted: Wed Feb 15, 2012 2:14 pm Post subject: |
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Dang you guys are good! Fixed, Doug! |
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Limerick Lane Audio Contributore Level V
Joined: 13 Jan 2012 Posts: 151
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Mandy Nelson MMD

Joined: 07 Aug 2008 Posts: 2914 Location: Wicked Mainah
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Posted: Wed Feb 15, 2012 11:04 pm Post subject: |
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Jeesh, all that's missing is the margarita bar. _________________ 006 member of the Sisterhood of the Traveling Mic. Bonded by sound.
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heyguido MMD

Joined: 31 Aug 2011 Posts: 2507 Location: RDU, the Geek Capitol of the South
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Posted: Thu Feb 16, 2012 7:19 am Post subject: |
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If there's a margarita bar, I am SO there......  _________________ Don Brookshire
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ricevoice Cinquecento

Joined: 28 Dec 2007 Posts: 532 Location: Sacramento, CA
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Posted: Thu Feb 16, 2012 7:51 am Post subject: |
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I realllllyyyyy like your site... simple, clean, professional, but with character. Can I ask who did it? I'm getting ready to overhaul my own site and am starting to look at my options. _________________ Chris Rice - Noisemaker
www.ricevoice.com |
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