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Eddie Eagle
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 Posted: Thu May 10, 2012 6:27 pm Post subject: Updated Commercial Demo |
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Based on what agents are looking for in a commercial demo today, I show my personality. Real guy with a touch of humor (albeit a little dark or quirky) in places.
www.tvradiovoice.com/audiofiles/commercial.mp3 |
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Bob Bergen
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| Posted: Fri May 11, 2012 7:21 am Post subject: |
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| It's pretty good, Eddie! I'd lose the intro music at the top of most spots. The intro music is there to establish to the listener that you've moved from one spot to the next. But it should be the variety in your intent from spot to spot the establishes this, not the music. Voice attached to voice, with contrasting intents and energies next to each other will show off your versatility and move the demo along better. But your reads are terrific. B |
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Eddie Eagle
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| Posted: Fri May 11, 2012 7:39 am Post subject: |
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Thanks Bob, I thought about the music point because you mentioned it before and thought just the last clip would have a couple notes before the voice. I'll tighten that stuff up.
I appreciate the listen and critique!
I've re-edited. |
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heyguido
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Love the last clip, by the way. Kind of a Ken Nordine vibe. It looks good on ya.
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Eddie Eagle
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Thanks Don!  |
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