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Mike Harrison M&M

Joined: 03 Nov 2007 Posts: 2029 Location: Equidistant from New York City and Philadelphia, along the NJ Shore
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Posted: Mon Aug 31, 2015 2:48 pm Post subject: New Documentary/Reality Demo |
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It may not be the most entertaining 95 seconds you'll ever spend, but maybe it'll delay you long enough from having to dry the dinner dishes.
Seeking any comments; particularly recommendations for sequencing, please.
My new documentary/reality demo. _________________ Mike
Male Voice Over Talent
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FinMac Lucky 700

Joined: 14 Jan 2013 Posts: 707 Location: In a really cool place...Finland!
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Posted: Sun Sep 20, 2015 9:26 pm Post subject: drop number 2 |
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Overall I like it, but I would drop the second piece. The third piece really starts to grab your attention. Well done! _________________ www.scottsvoiceover.com - An American voice in Finland
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Fran McClellan The Thirteenth Floor

Joined: 15 Feb 2010 Posts: 1314 Location: Middle of Nowhere, PA
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Posted: Tue Sep 22, 2015 8:45 am Post subject: |
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Outstanding, Mike!! I agree with the idea of dropping the second piece. _________________ Back into the murky lurk from whence I came
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IC Voiceman Contributor
Joined: 11 Apr 2017 Posts: 25 Location: Gauteng, South Africa
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Posted: Sat Apr 15, 2017 8:41 pm Post subject: |
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Hi Mike, I must admit to being pleasantly surprised by the quality of your demo. In my humble opinion you have the timbre, delivery and all else pretty much spot on. I do agree with the previous comments, drop the second one. Your voice is well-suited to number one. Keep it up!  |
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Mike Harrison M&M

Joined: 03 Nov 2007 Posts: 2029 Location: Equidistant from New York City and Philadelphia, along the NJ Shore
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Posted: Sun Apr 16, 2017 5:10 am Post subject: |
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Thank you, Scott, Fran and Ian! I very much appreciate your feedback.
And, surprisingly, that each of you recommended dropping the second segment is a prime example of something mentioned in the recent thread in the Chat forum, "Who made your demo:" including an excerpt simply because it was from an actual, paying job is not reason enough to include it.
That second piece you referred to was taken from an episode of TV's "Forensic Files," in which I was hired to read the ransom note of a kidnapper. It was an added thrill for me being interwoven with the voice of one of my favorite narrators, the late, great Peter Thomas.
The rest of the segments? I produced them all specifically for the demo.
Thanks again! _________________ Mike
Male Voice Over Talent
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Al Moulliet Contributor

Joined: 29 Mar 2017 Posts: 29 Location: Reno NV
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Posted: Sun Apr 16, 2017 7:05 pm Post subject: |
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Good Demo Mike. _________________ Create your own Great Life
Al Moulliet
www.moullietvoicepro.com |
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