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that voice · Joined: 05 Mar 2018 Posts: 1

Thanks in advance! You know how it is...you've listened to your demo dozens of times, and realize some "fresh ears," would be helpful to know all is good (or not). Would appreciate your input/feedback before replacing the older one currently on my site. Thanks fellow VOs! Here's the link for the new demo:

https://clyp.it/euhjudiy

(Just click the yellow play button for 1 minute demo)

Mike Harrison · Posted: Fri Apr 06, 2018 12:59 pm Post subject:

Well, I'm "detached" from the commercial world (I do mostly narration work and don't watch a lot of TV or listen to much radio), but I liked what I heard!
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Bruce · Posted: Fri Apr 06, 2018 1:05 pm Post subject:

Hi Tracie, the clips are all good and representative of your work, but I would think about taking that first clip and moving it back. The staggered read just seems odd for your first impression. And a tiny thing... most JC Penney ads I hear are much peppier than your read. I'm not saying that's a better way, just that it stood out a bit to me.

Onward and upward!

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Philip Banks · Posted: Fri Apr 06, 2018 10:40 pm Post subject:

Nice sound. Demo needs to say "Why her?" Which is an invitation to decide. You are at the stage where you can afford to play with subtleties.

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Bruce · Posted: Sat Apr 07, 2018 9:06 am Post subject:

Philip Banks · Posted: Tue Apr 10, 2018 4:41 am Post subject:

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Tre M. · Posted: Wed Apr 11, 2018 12:56 pm Post subject:

Tre M. · Posted: Wed Apr 11, 2018 12:57 pm Post subject:

Nice demo too btw.
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