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Susan Sierra Guest
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Posted: Thu Aug 21, 2008 8:15 am Post subject: Hi there! Please critique my commercial demo. |
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Hi...this is the first demo I've done in about 10 years. I'm still doing some final tweaking and would love to hear what you think.
Thanks so much for taking the time to listen...
http://www.vo-bb.com/demos/SusanSierraCommercialDemoV1.mp3
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Philip Banks Je Ne Sais Quoi

Joined: 20 Jun 2005 Posts: 11076 Location: Portgordon, Scotland
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Posted: Thu Aug 21, 2008 8:21 am Post subject: |
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Lovely! Just two very minor points. The smouldering clip before the "breast cancer" clip sounded too processed and the Breast Cancer clip was "I'm sounding pathetic" and that was obviously not the sound you were trying to achieve.
Apart from my two pedantic niggles, one of the best demo's I've heard in a long time. |
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jrodriguez315 A Hundred Dozen

Joined: 26 Sep 2006 Posts: 1202 Location: New Jersey
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Susan Sierra Guest
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Posted: Fri Aug 22, 2008 6:19 am Post subject: |
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Thanks a lot Philip...really appreciate it. And...uh...you too Joe  |
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Chuck Davis M&M

Joined: 02 Feb 2005 Posts: 2389 Location: Where I love to be...Between the Vineyards and the Cows.
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Posted: Fri Aug 22, 2008 7:34 am Post subject: |
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First rate! Sounds great. _________________ Wicked huge.....in India.
www.chuckdaviscreative.com |
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Susan Sierra Guest
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Posted: Mon Aug 25, 2008 9:56 pm Post subject: |
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thanks Chuck  |
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