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daveynate Contributor
Joined: 30 Dec 2014 Posts: 42 Location: Studio City, CA
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Posted: Mon Mar 07, 2016 10:11 pm Post subject: Finally something to critique |
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UPDATED WITH PROPER LINKS
If anyone feels so inclined, I wouldn't mind some thoughts on my website and demo. The site was made by Kathy Osborne, and the demo was produced by Nancy Wolfson. Cheers! _________________ "If the shit fits, wear it."
Donald 'Duck' Dunn
http://davidgoldsteinvo.com
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paulstefano Backstage Pass
Joined: 22 Sep 2015 Posts: 411 Location: Baltimore, MD
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Posted: Tue Mar 08, 2016 6:14 am Post subject: |
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Well, first things first, the link in the post doesn't work. It's not clickable.
Also, when I type www.davidgoldstein.com into a browser, I get nothing.
Edit: I see you just need to update your signature. _________________ http://www.paulstefano.com
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todd ellis A Zillion
Joined: 02 Jan 2007 Posts: 10498 Location: little egypt
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Posted: Tue Mar 08, 2016 6:26 am Post subject: |
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david --- i SUPER like it. clean. simple. love the colors. _________________ "i know philip banks": todd ellis
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Scott Pollak The Gates of Troy
Joined: 01 Jun 2010 Posts: 1903 Location: Looking out at the San Juan mountains
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Posted: Tue Mar 08, 2016 9:42 am Post subject: |
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I agree with Todd. And the demo rocks, too. Of course... it's Wolfson-produced! Not to mention you're loaded with talent and that sought-after age voice. Sweet stuff. _________________ Scott R. Pollak
Clients include Pandora, NPR Atlanta, Wells Fargo, Cisco, Humana, Publix, UPS, AT&T, HP, Xerox and more.
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daveynate Contributor
Joined: 30 Dec 2014 Posts: 42 Location: Studio City, CA
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Posted: Wed Mar 09, 2016 1:31 pm Post subject: |
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Thank you so much for the kind words! _________________ "If the shit fits, wear it."
Donald 'Duck' Dunn
http://davidgoldsteinvo.com |
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Bob Bergen CM
Joined: 22 Apr 2008 Posts: 953
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Posted: Wed Mar 09, 2016 2:31 pm Post subject: |
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Outstanding! Great reads, your style and personality are established from the first 5 seconds, it moves while still allowing the listener to "get" each spot, production that sounds broadcast real, believable and conversational, and it leaves the listener wanting to hear more.
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Gregory Best The Gates of Troy
Joined: 04 Aug 2005 Posts: 1853 Location: San Diego area (east of Connie and south and east of Bailey)
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Posted: Wed Mar 09, 2016 7:29 pm Post subject: |
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What Bob said. _________________ Gregory Best
greg@gregorybest.com |
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daveynate Contributor
Joined: 30 Dec 2014 Posts: 42 Location: Studio City, CA
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Posted: Wed Mar 09, 2016 7:50 pm Post subject: |
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Extremely grateful for that, Mr. Bergen (and for your seconding, Mr. Best). Can't wait to get into your class! _________________ "If the shit fits, wear it."
Donald 'Duck' Dunn
http://davidgoldsteinvo.com |
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Lance Blair M&M
Joined: 03 Jun 2007 Posts: 2279 Location: Atlanta
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Posted: Wed Mar 09, 2016 7:59 pm Post subject: |
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"...a level of professionalism his mother is extremely proud of."
Might possibly be my favorite copy from any VO site.
The font for your name is great, too. A lot of black & blue websites out there but yours is very memorable for its play with texture and light. _________________ Skype: globalvoiceover
and now, http://lanceblairvo.com the blog is there now too! |
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daveynate Contributor
Joined: 30 Dec 2014 Posts: 42 Location: Studio City, CA
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Posted: Wed Mar 09, 2016 8:02 pm Post subject: |
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Thanks, Mr. Blair. All credit for the font, and the entire look of the site, goes to Kathy Osborne. _________________ "If the shit fits, wear it."
Donald 'Duck' Dunn
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todd ellis A Zillion
Joined: 02 Jan 2007 Posts: 10498 Location: little egypt
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Posted: Thu Mar 10, 2016 6:41 am Post subject: |
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Quote: | "...a level of professionalism his mother is extremely proud of." |
i used to have something similar on my website, but my mother's attorney made me take it down. _________________ "i know philip banks": todd ellis
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Jason Huggins The Gates of Troy
Joined: 12 Aug 2011 Posts: 1846 Location: In the souls of a million jeans
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Posted: Thu Mar 10, 2016 8:30 am Post subject: |
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I like the overall style! Simple and concise. Good job. Just from a nit picking standpoint, the audio player is a hair wonky looking on my screen. The marker dots that allow scrubbing and volume adjustment are not in the right place. It looks like the position of the handle is just a bit off.
This is on a Mac with the current Chrome and I also checked on Android 6.0 with CM Browser.
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todd ellis A Zillion
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Posted: Thu Mar 10, 2016 11:52 am Post subject: |
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i see what you're talking about --- the "dot" is a bit higher than you expect it to be. i just thought that was a design choice. _________________ "i know philip banks": todd ellis
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sdaeley17 Club 300
Joined: 04 Sep 2013 Posts: 338 Location: Port Orchard, WA
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Posted: Thu Mar 10, 2016 6:06 pm Post subject: |
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Hi, David! Great stuff! Love the theme of the site, and you're reads are awesome!. Only two things:
1) like others have mentioned the play marker is just off center, a little higher than usual.
2) On my laptop at least, your "Contact Dave" button is chopped in half by the copyright banner on the bottom. _________________ "There's Magic all around us; you just have to see it. And the most wonderful Magic of all, is just bein' alive." -Uncle Montork, He-Man and the Masters of the Universe |
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yarg28 Been Here Awhile
Joined: 25 Aug 2014 Posts: 267 Location: Indiana
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Posted: Fri Mar 11, 2016 8:29 am Post subject: |
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Love all of it. Great reads, sounds relevant, page style is attractively simple.
Good stuff! |
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