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DianaWehbe · Guest

tHANKS FOR LENDING YOUR EARS AND ADVICE ... Smile

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DIANAWEHBE
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Bruce · Posted: Sat Oct 17, 2009 9:01 am Post subject:

Hey Diana,

You have a very appealing sound, so with a good marketing plan you should start picking up work. But first I will say you may want to have someone else edit and engineer your demo from the raw material you have in hand. It's very "crispy/crunchy" sounding and the edit points are a bit weird. A more experienced "ear" will give you better results.

Keep it up,

Bruce
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todd ellis · Posted: Sat Oct 17, 2009 9:09 am Post subject:

i, of course, agree with bruce, being that he is my hero and all ...

i love the quality and texture in your voice, but i don't think this mix does you justice, it all sounds a little "thin". for some reason, even though it's only 39 seconds it "feels" long to me ... longer than it actually is, i mean. i'd cut about 1/2 of the 2nd bit and lead with it - it's really strong & maybe shorten the others by x% and add a couple more/different bits.

jmho
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DianaWehbe · Guest

Hey there... sorry i know im like 4 months late, i've been outta town working like a crazy person! lol ... thank you so much for your encouragment and responses... Bruce, do you have an email addy? i tried clicking the "email" button but it wouldn't go through...
Thanks in advance!
Blessings,
Diana Wehbe
www.dianawehbe.blogspot.com