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Moe Egan 4 Large

Joined: 11 Sep 2006 Posts: 4339 Location: Live Free or Die
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Posted: Tue Aug 31, 2010 12:00 pm Post subject: Can copywriters come up with a different line please? |
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If I have to read the line "In tough economic times like these...." one more time....
It's almost become an acting exercise - to be able to read it each time like it's never been said before. Puts me in mind of DLF -someone asked him "Do you get bored with saying "In a world..." all the time? He responded with "You have to love the words. You have to believe in the words. It's all about service to the words. Always."
I just wish someone would come up with a different set of words.
Thank you for letting me vent and ponder. I feel much better. _________________ Moe Egan
i want to be the voice in your head.
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bobsouer Frequent Flyer

Joined: 15 Jul 2006 Posts: 9883 Location: Pittsburgh, PA
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Posted: Tue Aug 31, 2010 12:51 pm Post subject: |
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Moe,
You're preaching to the choir. _________________ Be well,
Bob Souer (just think of lemons)
The second nicest guy in voiceover.
+1-724-613-2749
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Lizden A Zillion

Joined: 04 Dec 2006 Posts: 8864 Location: The dark recesses of my mind
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Posted: Tue Aug 31, 2010 1:18 pm Post subject: |
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Amen!  _________________ Liz de Nesnera O.A.V. ~ Livin' The VO Dream!
English/French Bilingual VO w/ ISDN
HireLiz.com / liz@hireliz.com |
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Lance Blair M&M

Joined: 03 Jun 2007 Posts: 2281 Location: Atlanta
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Posted: Tue Aug 31, 2010 1:22 pm Post subject: |
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Altenates:
Now that Capitalism is going down the crapper just like Communism...
Look in that wallet of yours. See those cobwebs?
We're all screwed in the el dinero scene, but it's okay...
Today it's trendy once again to impersonate parsimonious Old Scots...
We're going to just have a moment of silence for our economy for the next five minutes while we show graphics from our Q3 video from 1997. Thanks for watching... _________________ Skype: globalvoiceover
and now, http://lanceblairvo.com the blog is there now too! |
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Bailey 4 Large

Joined: 04 Jun 2005 Posts: 4336 Location: Lake San Marcos... north of Connie, northwest of the Best.
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Posted: Tue Aug 31, 2010 2:55 pm Post subject: |
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"In cartilaginous economic times like these...." _________________ "Bailey"
a.k.a. Jim Sutton
Retired... Every day is Saturday, except Sunday.
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imaginator The Thirteenth Floor

Joined: 10 Nov 2004 Posts: 1348 Location: raleigh, nc
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Posted: Tue Aug 31, 2010 8:00 pm Post subject: |
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how about:
"In A World of Tough Economic Times Like These...."
i guess you can respect the words, even though you are repelled by them...much like a poisonous snake. _________________ rowell gormon
www.voices2go.com
"Mr. Warm & Friendly Voice...with Character!"
Rowell Gormon's Clogged Blog - http://voices2go.com/blog |
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Bruce Boardmeister

Joined: 06 Jun 2005 Posts: 7977 Location: Portland, OR
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Posted: Wed Sep 01, 2010 4:41 am Post subject: |
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"In these pre-bread-line times of ours..."
"As we wait for the other economic shoe to drop..."
"While the world wobbles on it's financial axis..."
B _________________ VO-BB Member #31 Enlisted June, 2005
I'm not a Zoo, but over the years I've played one on radio/TV. . |
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anthonyVO 14th Avenue
Joined: 09 Aug 2005 Posts: 1470 Location: NYC
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Posted: Wed Sep 01, 2010 5:39 am Post subject: |
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"In tough economic times..." has surpassed the all-time classic tag line of "What are you waiting for?"
-Anthony |
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Moe Egan 4 Large

Joined: 11 Sep 2006 Posts: 4339 Location: Live Free or Die
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Posted: Wed Sep 01, 2010 6:48 am Post subject: |
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So right Anthony- how about "But wait- there's more!"
Or...in this case, "But wait, there's less!"  _________________ Moe Egan
i want to be the voice in your head.
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Lee Gordon A Zillion

Joined: 25 Jul 2008 Posts: 6864 Location: West Hartford, CT
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Posted: Wed Sep 01, 2010 9:29 am Post subject: |
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For all your economic needs, tough times are upon us. Yes ... that's right ... tough times are upon us, so remember ... _________________ Lee Gordon, O.A.V.
Voice President of the United States
www.leegordonproductions.com
Twitter: @LeeGordonVoice
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flaspots Contributore Level V
Joined: 14 Feb 2008 Posts: 191
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Posted: Wed Sep 01, 2010 6:56 pm Post subject: |
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I delete it from the copy and rewrite so the script isn't starting on a negative.
So far, no one has ever told me to "put it back". |
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KarenL Been Here Awhile

Joined: 22 Jul 2009 Posts: 258 Location: North of San Francisco
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Posted: Wed Sep 01, 2010 7:18 pm Post subject: |
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"In tough economic times like these...it's such a relief when the check clears. Theirs - and mine!"
 _________________ Happy to be here.
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asnively Triple G

Joined: 17 Jun 2006 Posts: 3204 Location: Los Angeles
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Posted: Wed Sep 01, 2010 8:25 pm Post subject: |
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"In tough economic times like these, companies often skip hiring a competant copywriter with a thesaurus." _________________ the Amy Snively family of brands for all your branded thing needs.
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