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tokyofan
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PostPosted: Thu Aug 11, 2011 2:55 am    Post subject: Help with commercial demo! Reply with quote

I'm putting together an updated commercial mix and would appreciate any help or suggestions! Here's what I have so far:

http://cl.ly/1I1R1l330U0g412f2p16

Any thoughts on the order of the spots, what's missing, what should be dropped, etc. OK to use company names? My sense is I need one or two more lighter, natural spots to balance out the more aggressive, deeper sounding stuff. Thanks for your feedback!
Chris

P.S. I've got a bunch of demos posted on Voice123, if there's anything there I should include. http://voice123.com/chriskoprowski {if anyone has time to kill. Gasp )
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PostPosted: Sun Aug 28, 2011 12:01 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

The .wav file is too heavy for my connection, so I listened to your commercial mix. I hear a lot of range between natural and announcer tones. Your VO represents at least 90% of the commercial work out there. Maybe also try uploading a light mp3 if the wave is different from your Voice 123 offerings?
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tokyofan
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PostPosted: Sun Aug 28, 2011 12:12 pm    Post subject: re: Reply with quote

Thanks for the heads-up! I didn't realize WAVs might be too heavy. Does this link load faster? http://soundcloud.com/chriskoprowski/commercial-demo-60-1

Yes, my 'Commercial Mix' on Voice123 is the same....good to know it has enough variation. I'm tweaking it a bit and will try to add another short spot. Will post results soon. Thx for listening!
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PostPosted: Sun Aug 28, 2011 12:32 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Yes, sound cloud plays your file instantly.

Your VO sounds older than you look. If that's a current pic, you should comb some grey into your hair. Slick it back with a Clark Gable moustache. Yeah, that's who you sound like: Gable.
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PostPosted: Sun Aug 28, 2011 4:03 pm    Post subject: re: Reply with quote

haha. Thats IS a current photo and I just turned 42!
But I get that a lot. When I walk into the studio, Japanese clients are little confused and worried....Smile
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