VO-BB - 19 YEARS OLD!

melissa eX

Not in critique because I think the only thing that may change is I may swap something out for a bit with a few words in Spanish. Once I do that then I'll put them in critique for comparison. Otherwise, I'm really happy with this.

...I mean feel free to critique if you'd like but I probably won't change anything.

...Did that sentence come off as bad as it reads? lol! You guys know what I mean. (Or is that as badly as it reads?)

I probably need an emoticon there or something....

eX Commercial Demo
_________________
www.melissaeXelberth.com
from crime...to the divine(R)
bilingual vo

Bish · Posted: Mon Jul 09, 2012 6:34 pm Post subject:

Works for me... I was thinking you should do the whole thing again in Spanish... but then I thought how well that suggestion might be received, and decided to prevent excessive bruising and agree that a couple of words or phases would be enough to let the listener know of your bilingual capabilities Smile

Seriously Mel, one of the reasons I love your voice is because it's recognizably you. Mainstream messages without being at all generic (if that makes sense). This showcases it well.
_________________
Bish a.k.a. Bish
Smoke me a kipper... I'll be back for breakfast.
I will not feed the trolls... I will not feed the trolls... I will not feed the trolls... I will not feed the trolls.

DougVox · Posted: Mon Jul 09, 2012 6:55 pm Post subject:

I love the fact that your signature sound comes through very clearly, with some really nice variations on the theme. It shows a wonderful range within that signature, so overall, I think it's a real winner.

No idea who suggested adding a bit o' español to the mix, but it's genius! Wink

I really think it'd make sense to add at least a line of Spanish, so folks can hear how effortlessly you can trasnsition between the two languages, and to show off your fluency.
_________________
Doug Turkel (tur-KELL)
Voiceover UNnouncer®
UNnouncer.com

melissa eX · Posted: Mon Jul 09, 2012 7:01 pm Post subject:

Lizden · Posted: Mon Jul 09, 2012 8:35 pm Post subject:

I already told you, but I LOVE it! Laugh

_________________
Liz de Nesnera O.A.V. ~ Livin' The VO Dream!
English/French Bilingual VO w/ ISDN
HireLiz.com / liz@hireliz.com

Philip Banks · Posted: Mon Jul 09, 2012 11:54 pm Post subject:

The 0.5 second pause in clip two which should really be placed 5th out of 6 in only 8 must be moved and extended as it will be bracketed by the other two you should move from the present outer points inwards. Tone, mood and style is very 80's whereas the market now is looking for style, tone, edge, style, mood, style and style; you captivise 8 out of the 7 KPIs well. The run up to the beginning of the commencement prepared me for the start which then led me throughout the entire whole of the demo which was crafted to end just after it stopped.

Bruce · Posted: Tue Jul 10, 2012 7:54 am Post subject:

I could discuss which cut I think should go first and nothing else, but I won't. Very nice indeed!

B
_________________
VO-BB Member #31 Enlisted June, 2005

I'm not a Zoo, but over the years I've played one on radio/TV. .

Diane Maggipinto · Posted: Tue Jul 10, 2012 7:58 am Post subject:

i'm not even going to listen.

it's. that. good. Inoccent

_________________
sitting at #8, though not as present as I'd like to be. Hello!

www.d3voiceworks.com

KaraEdwards · Posted: Tue Jul 10, 2012 8:21 am Post subject:

Always love hearing your voice...great new demo!!!
_________________
Threadjackers local 420

Kara Edwards
http://www.karaedwards.com
kara@karaedwards.com

Philip Banks · Posted: Tue Jul 10, 2012 8:22 am Post subject:

I ZEN listened!

Fer them of y'all what don't know what that means; I merely bleebed I heard it.

Pam · Posted: Tue Jul 10, 2012 9:05 pm Post subject:

eXcellent! love the variations at the end the really highlight the signature sound at the beginning. Congrats!!
_________________
Pam Tierney
www.pamtierneyvo.com
imdb profile http://imdb.com/name/nm1941932/

Now what did I come in here for?

Jeffrey Kafer · Posted: Tue Jul 10, 2012 9:43 pm Post subject:

I'm going to move this to critique just to piss you off.
_________________
Jeff
http://JeffreyKafer.com
Voice-overload Web comic: http://voice-overload.com

melissa eX · Posted: Tue Jul 10, 2012 9:52 pm Post subject:

You go right ahead Kafer. Actually I was going to move it. 'cause I had something from a Spanish spot I did added. So there.
[/img]

Donna · Posted: Wed Jul 11, 2012 12:05 pm Post subject:

Glad it's not moved to critique yet, cuz I just wanted to say Love It. You sound eXactly like you. And that is pretty damn cool.
_________________
Dangerous.

Donna Postel
donnapostel.com
donna@donnapostel.com

melissa eX · Posted: Wed Jul 11, 2012 2:17 pm Post subject:

Thank you. I replaced it with one with a line of Spanish so I think the link goes there now. It's kind of a joke too if you understand the language.

Kafer you can put it whereever you want to Gasp