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Narration Demo via Video

 
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Rick Riley
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PostPosted: Tue May 22, 2012 4:43 pm    Post subject: Narration Demo via Video Reply with quote
Hi All,

I wasn't going to put this up, but after I saw Chuck's commercial demo, I decided if I might as well get some feedback.

My commercial demo remains audio, but I think narration goes a little better when it's supplemented by the video it's narrating. So this is what I came up with...

https://vimeo.com/27508988

Your obervations are always appreciated!
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heyguido
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PostPosted: Wed May 23, 2012 8:09 am    Post subject: Reply with quote
Fade to black/fade audio before the Moto logo/disclaimer slide. Also might want to realign audio to video in a couple of spots where the audio/video don't line up. Will help to improve flow and drag the listener/viewer along.

Otherwise, looks and sounds great. Nice start.
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Bruce
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PostPosted: Wed May 23, 2012 8:15 am    Post subject: Reply with quote
Most excellent.


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