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Bailey
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PostPosted: Sun Jul 15, 2012 4:22 pm    Post subject: Once over... please Reply with quote

These links appear to be bad. Use links in the next post.

1st Run

2nd Run
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Location: Lake San Marcos... north of Connie, northwest of the Best.

PostPosted: Tue Jul 17, 2012 5:01 pm    Post subject: Re: Once over... please Reply with quote

Client requested a recording of a DJ coming back on the air after a power loss of unknown origin... and then a loss of power again at the end. 1st recording is verbatim, 2nd recording is my interpretation... he is very flexible.
Please, I'd like a critique of both recordings... ways to improve... and how to stop all the "s" sounds.

Ignore the above links....Had to move the audios...

Run1A&Run2A
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PostPosted: Wed Jul 18, 2012 7:59 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

I wish I could give you exact advice on the S thing. I do it every once in a while and it shocks the heck out of me. I just make sure my diction is extra precise for a bit and it doesn't happen again. Maybe it's a soft tongue against the back of the front teeth?

As far as the acting thing, if you're a laid back kind of guy on a laid back kind of station you're read is OK. Otherwise I'd consider putting more of that d.j. energy into it, and I'd consider taking the smallest of pauses between statements as though you're going through all the bits of information on paper and in your head. Basically add a little drama. You have a little bit of fear and concern, but as the voice on the radio you're there to reassure everyone.

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