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LindZ
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PostPosted: Tue Jan 29, 2013 6:07 pm    Post subject: Video Game / Anime Demo Reply with quote

Deleted since it's not finished! Laugh
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PostPosted: Tue Jan 29, 2013 6:33 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Hey Lindsay, I didn't hear anything that needs to be pulled (well maybe the third one...a little too old for you?) but you do have quite a few cuts that are similar-ish in your middle range. I know it's like sending your children out the door, but cutting out or cutting down some of those would be a good bet. You probably can get by at around 1:30 for length.

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PostPosted: Wed Jan 30, 2013 7:49 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Laugh
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Philip Banks
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PostPosted: Wed Jan 30, 2013 9:11 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Old lady and lower register stuff is not you so simply remove those parts and it's a winner.
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PostPosted: Wed Jan 30, 2013 10:32 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

I agree with Bruce and Phillip.

The older, gruff roles are not your strong points.

Better to have a :60 demo with your best stuff and no repeat sounds.

Wow 'em and leaving wanting for more!
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PostPosted: Wed Jan 30, 2013 11:28 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Thanks guys! I'm going to take out the old lady, tough teen kid, scumbag copy and tighten up a few of the spots.

Thanks!!!
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PostPosted: Wed Jan 30, 2013 11:56 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Wow— did you take it down? I was just giving it a listen.

I'll give you some feedback when I can hear it again.
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PostPosted: Wed Jan 30, 2013 3:21 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

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I'm going to take out the old lady, tough teen kid, scumbag copy


I don't know...kinda liked the tough teen kid one
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PostPosted: Wed Jan 30, 2013 4:06 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Fran McClellan wrote:
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I'm going to take out the old lady, tough teen kid, scumbag copy


I don't know...kinda liked the tough teen kid one


We decided to change it to a younger tough kid so it fits my range better. I'll post it here once I get it back!
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