VO-BB - 20 YEARS OLD!

[captain54]

Narration Documentary Demo.. tracked with an iTrack Solo/Twisted Wave, production in GarageBand, mastering in Auria.. Produced on an iPad 3

https://soundcloud.com/captain54/documentary-narration
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Lee Kanne
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[Bruce]

Presuming you are looking for just a technical critique, the audio is clear and it sounds normal across the spectrum. However, the music was annoying (repetitive... a Garage Band loop?) and part of that was the volume kept popping up in between every break in your speaking. If you manually adjusted to music volume that way, I say don't, and if you've got a plug-in doing that, I say make it stop.

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VO-BB Member #31 Enlisted June, 2005

I'm not a Zoo, but over the years I've played one on radio/TV. .

[captain54]

that's ducking side chained thru a compressor you are hearing.. I had a hard time making it blend.. So you feel the music is too repetitive, on top of the fact that the ducking is too obvious? a different bed would help perhaps?
any suggestions as far as mood and feel of a new piece? thanks Bruce
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[captain54]

revised narration/doc demo with non-annoying (I hope) music backing...

https://soundcloud.com/captain54/narration-documentary
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Lee Kanne
www.leekanne.com