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Mike Harrison M&M

Joined: 03 Nov 2007 Posts: 2029 Location: Equidistant from New York City and Philadelphia, along the NJ Shore
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Posted: Fri Apr 06, 2018 12:39 pm Post subject: Sequencing Feedback Desired |
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I'm pretty much satisfied with the segments for this general narration compilation demo, but I'm not at all sure about their sequencing.
If you're not busy and willing to subject yourself to my noise, I'd appreciate any feedback on the sequencing... and the content, too, if you're so moved.
Many, many thanks upon you!
https://mike-harrison.com/vobb/180405-MikeHarrison-GenNar-Seq-1.mp3 _________________ Mike
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Bruce Boardmeister

Joined: 06 Jun 2005 Posts: 7973 Location: Portland, OR
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Posted: Fri Apr 06, 2018 1:11 pm Post subject: |
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You could easily split this into two demos, television narration and corporate narration. I enjoyed the civil war and Calistoga train pieces the most and might shift them forward. The ticking noise in the first cut was annoying as heck to my ears...maybe not to others.
B _________________ VO-BB Member #31 Enlisted June, 2005
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