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asnively
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PostPosted: Thu Jan 11, 2007 6:22 pm    Post subject: New promo demo for your consideration.... Reply with quote

Any feedback on this before I have it mastered? In particular, do you like the order?

Amy's new promo demo.
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PostPosted: Thu Jan 11, 2007 6:47 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Order should be:

1. Fashion Challenged
2. Sponge Bob
3. Baron
4. Olivia (thought I heard a bit of mouth music in there)
5. Sci Fi
6. Drop HGTV or recut as you botched the calls. Peanut butter possibly?

First three were especially strong. Nice job on the audio cuts.

I imagine there will be some discussion about the length of the TV audio in each cut so I'll reserve judgement.

Over all nice job.
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PostPosted: Thu Jan 11, 2007 7:07 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Amy,

Once again you blow me away with the quality of your sound and your work. I agree with pretty much everything Peter said, especially about sequence and the HGTV cut. (It's good that it's at the end, where very few people will hear it.)

However, I'm not troubled by the length of the TV sound bites. But, hey, what do I know?

Well, I know this: This is Really Nice Work.
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PostPosted: Thu Jan 11, 2007 8:12 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I'm so glad I asked!!! I didn't notice the mouth noise on the Olivia spot and I didn't notice the garbled HGTV tag. I will fix those and change the order. I am so grateful for your help!
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PostPosted: Fri Jan 12, 2007 5:15 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Good that there are people here who pay attention to detail. I listened and neither the order or the other points raised made any impression. Put $1,000,000 in an envelope and people are unlikely to complain that the packing was torn and the bills were the wrong denomination.
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PostPosted: Fri Jan 12, 2007 7:07 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Yup, I agree with Philip--good to go. Put that grand in an envelope!
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PostPosted: Fri Jan 12, 2007 8:43 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Absolutely incredible!...That is all I have to say.

BTW...What production package(s) did the beds come from?...if you don't mind my asking.
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PostPosted: Fri Jan 12, 2007 9:42 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Good stuff Amy!
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PostPosted: Fri Jan 12, 2007 9:48 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

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BTW...What production package(s) did the beds come from?...if you don't mind my asking.


I wondered the same.

Nice work, Amy! It's so different from your other demo and the variety of tone is superdupe.
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PostPosted: Fri Jan 12, 2007 10:04 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Thanks guys! I had the demo produced by media insiders, so I'm not sure that the beds are actually available as part of a production package. I don't know for sure, I'm sorry!
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PostPosted: Fri Jan 12, 2007 11:06 am    Post subject: I'm a fan. Reply with quote

Amy,

This is just my opinion but I wouldn't say the demo really conveys how versatile you can be. It's heavily weighted with your conversational delivery.

E.G. Fashion Challenged, Biography, Men In Trees, HGTV are all the same delivery. The Sci-Fi promo sounds similar with a subtle attenuation of your voice. At least that's what I'm hearing.

The stand out for me was the SpongeBob promo.

Again, I'm a fan of your voice. Laugh It's milky smooth but powerful.
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PostPosted: Fri Jan 12, 2007 11:33 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Uh oh. Maybe I'm just not very versatile, though.
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PostPosted: Fri Jan 12, 2007 12:20 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

But you are professional and curvaceous.
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PostPosted: Fri Jan 12, 2007 3:27 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

asnively wrote:
Uh oh. Maybe I'm just not very versatile, though.


I don't believe that.
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PostPosted: Fri Jan 12, 2007 4:57 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

You're in a very nice place - Better than you think you are as opposed to not as good as you believe yourself to be. As for the curves, it would be improper of me to comment.
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