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Bailey
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PostPosted: Mon May 21, 2007 1:05 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Pastels work quite well... very feminine.
I agree with Jeffrey... to a point.
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... and the shoe is a nice touch that goes well with your slogan of "A voice that fits".

"... that fits" (to me) could also mean a shoe or a glove.
Very nice demos... I would lose the slate at the end... but keeping the front slate should be your option.
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PostPosted: Mon May 21, 2007 2:43 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

michelleann wrote:
Thanks for the input. Smile I was told by others to leave the resume up there because even though yes, I have scant experience so far as I've just started...it does show I'm not a complete newbie. I am kind of on the fence about it. I really appreciate all your input.

I understand how you feel. But to casting directors, that resume would say "newbie" loud and clear. In fact having a link that says "resume" on your home page says "newbie." So, if you're trying to downplay your newness, this is working against you. Smile
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PostPosted: Mon May 21, 2007 3:23 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Okay. Smile What about having a "news" section where I could just make little posts to say "Hey this project just came out in stores nationwide" or "hey I was just cast in this".... or is that still too newbie?
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PostPosted: Mon May 21, 2007 3:32 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I am prone to post announcements like that on my site...
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PostPosted: Tue May 22, 2007 1:07 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Once again "News" postings are good but one has to ensure that the content is news worthy to avoid them being perceived as "Wow! I can't believe it, I ACTUALLY managed to get a job!"

News must be news for them, not you. We all need to learn to walk a mile in the shoes of the people who hire us. In the same way that your demo has to engage so does your web site.
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PostPosted: Tue May 22, 2007 9:51 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

I was thinking about using the news section for posting when things were released in stores or online for sale, in addition to announcing any big projects I may hopefully become a part of in the future.. Do you think that would be a good idea or do you think that is too amateur and making it sound like "Omg I really did a job!"..

Thanks Amy and Philip for your input.
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PostPosted: Tue May 22, 2007 7:22 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Well, we actually just took it all down and dressed it up a bit so it didn't look so barren. Would love to hear what you all think! Smile Just the demos and contact info up there for now.
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PostPosted: Tue May 22, 2007 7:44 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Better, but I'd still get rid of the Flash "click here" issue...it's a very fast fix. Copy / paste and you'll be done in about a minute.

Also, is there some reason you're not using an e-mail address at michelleann.com? It's more professional to use e-mail at your own domain. Smile
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PostPosted: Tue May 22, 2007 7:49 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I really like Gmail, but I did set up michelle@michelleann.com. Guess my husband forgot to update it. Smile Thanks. I'll also remind him to fix the click to activate.
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PostPosted: Tue May 22, 2007 8:19 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

You can have your pro mail forward to your Gmail account.

It's worth it to have a domain-named e-mail.
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PostPosted: Tue May 22, 2007 9:02 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

We actually got it set up so I can use gmail as a web client for michelle@michelleann.com w/o having to set up forwarding or anything. It's nifty! Smile

We're still working on the click to activate issue. My husband was working on it to make do that and something or other (I'm not programming savvy) and it made the website break. For now, we're going to leave it up as is until he has more time tomorrow to work on it.

Thanks again for all the advice everyone.
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PostPosted: Wed May 23, 2007 6:08 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Not sure what you mean about the click to activate "issue". There are no extra buttons that I'm seeing using Firefox. It looks clean and neat.
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PostPosted: Wed May 23, 2007 8:44 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Hi Don, thanks for checking it out and leaving a comment. I believe "click to activate" is an IE thing, so you wouldn't come across that problem in Firefox. I honestly had no idea it was an issue, but my husband was aware of it.

Thanks again for checking out the site. Smile
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