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mythwoman Contributore Level V
Joined: 08 Nov 2005 Posts: 173 Location: Texas
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Posted: Mon May 28, 2007 4:06 pm Post subject: Website Review, yes again, please... |
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Hi Everyone,
Alright it's been done for a third time. More simple, straight to the point. Deirdre gave me some much needed, awesome advice so I had my designer put it to good use.
I mainly want a page for clients to hear my demo online. I haven't got a client or credit list so I wanted everything to be easy to get to and somewhat pleasing to the eye.
Hope everyone had a nice holiday weekend.
Please, tell me your thoughts. I appreciate hearing from you guys.
Deirdre, I couldn't have done this without you!
http://www.letmarysayit.com
Mary |
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bobsouer Frequent Flyer
Joined: 15 Jul 2006 Posts: 9882 Location: Pittsburgh, PA
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Posted: Mon May 28, 2007 5:29 pm Post subject: |
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Mary,
I'm not sure what anyone else will say, but "We Have a Winner!" is what comes first to my mind. _________________ Be well,
Bob Souer (just think of lemons)
The second nicest guy in voiceover.
+1-724-613-2749
ISDN, Source Connect, phone patch |
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Deirdre Czarina Emeritus
Joined: 10 Nov 2004 Posts: 13016 Location: East Jesus, Maine
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Posted: Mon May 28, 2007 5:59 pm Post subject: |
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I LOVE LOVE LOVE the little highlights behind the first letters of Animation and Commercial.
One nit to pick: I wish the text at the bottom were centered.
Otherwise thrilling!!!
Yay! _________________ DBCooperVO.com |
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KaraEdwards M&M
Joined: 21 Feb 2007 Posts: 2374 Location: Behind a mic or camera, USA
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Donovan Cinquecento
Joined: 10 Jan 2007 Posts: 595 Location: Raleigh/Durham, NC
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Posted: Mon May 28, 2007 6:27 pm Post subject: |
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I like the site's layout, not crazy about the font, but hey...just my opinion.
Your commercial demo sounds good except for about 4 or so seconds of silence at the end of it. I don't know if that was intentional or not, just something I noticed.
Overall, looks good! _________________ Donovan
www.DonovanVO.com |
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audio'connell T-Shirt
Joined: 02 Feb 2005 Posts: 1949 Location: in a dark studio with a single bulb light...day after day after....
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Posted: Mon May 28, 2007 6:34 pm Post subject: |
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Mary:
I understand the "basic" purpose of the site and it is practical for the uses you described. However, to put up a site and not consider at least basic SEO requirements is akin to buying a new house but not getting a set of house keys....the house is yours but you'll have a hard time getting inside.
Your designer should be able to help you with title bar text and you need to focus on some key words. Your site does not have to be overly involved to be effective but minor fixes to the basics will allow you to not only open the store (put up a web site) but ensure somebody notices that the store is in fact open (SEO).
I hope this helps. _________________ - Peter
audioconnell Voice Over Talent
Your friendly, neighborhood voice over talent |
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Dave Lucky 700
Joined: 11 Nov 2004 Posts: 727 Location: Houston, Texas
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Posted: Mon May 28, 2007 7:31 pm Post subject: |
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Outstanding look Mary. And of course I'm particularly fond of the domain name
With the exception of the representation section not being centered I think its a home run! _________________ . If at first you don't succeed, then bomb disposal probably isn't for you. |
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mythwoman Contributore Level V
Joined: 08 Nov 2005 Posts: 173 Location: Texas
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Posted: Mon May 28, 2007 7:59 pm Post subject: |
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Thanks to everyone who posted here so far. I'm happy to receive some positive notes and those thathad nitpicks, I'll present them to my designer.
I hope to hear from more folks later on, people are not sick of me already.
Take care all!
Mary |
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Jeffrey Kafer Assistant Zookeeper
Joined: 09 Dec 2006 Posts: 4931 Location: Location, Location!
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mythwoman Contributore Level V
Joined: 08 Nov 2005 Posts: 173 Location: Texas
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Posted: Tue May 29, 2007 6:58 am Post subject: |
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Yikes,
Thanks for the notice Jeffrey. I have the address on my billboard. I guess I'm used to so many websites with .com.
Take Care,
Mary |
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tackerman The Gates of Troy
Joined: 14 Jun 2006 Posts: 1741 Location: in the ether
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Posted: Tue May 29, 2007 7:10 am Post subject: |
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MAJOR improvement! |
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louzucaro The Gates of Troy
Joined: 13 Jul 2006 Posts: 1915 Location: Chicago area
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Posted: Tue May 29, 2007 1:55 pm Post subject: |
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Looks really nice, but you should probably make the Lori Lins link open in a new window rather than replacing your site with theirs _________________ Lou Zucaro
http://www.voicehero.com
"Well, yeah, there's my favorite leaf!" |
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Diane Maggipinto Spreading Snark Worldwide
Joined: 03 Mar 2006 Posts: 6679 Location: saul lay seetee youtee
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Posted: Tue May 29, 2007 2:34 pm Post subject: |
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here's another 'yay' vote and an echo on centering the contact info and another shoutout for "not crazy about font" specific to contact info but otherwise ...
m u c h better! _________________ sitting at #8, though not as present as I'd like to be. Hello!
www.d3voiceworks.com |
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