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Yes Mr. Jones it is (was too long)

 
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voicejones
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PostPosted: Wed Sep 12, 2007 10:40 am    Post subject: Yes Mr. Jones it is (was too long) Reply with quote

After a very pleasant critique via a suprise phone call from a respected member of this vo-bb club...I reworked my long form demo. It is posted at the following link. http://home.earthlink.net/~voicejones6/JJNarDemo Comments are appreciated.
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PostPosted: Wed Sep 12, 2007 10:50 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Sounds better Jim. I think you are getting the idea.

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voicejones
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PostPosted: Wed Sep 12, 2007 11:22 am    Post subject: Thanks Chef Frank Reply with quote

It's like eating your own cooking....it tastes pretty good but a couple of adjustments to the recipe from another chef can make a tasty difference.
Frank I appreciate your help!
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PostPosted: Wed Sep 12, 2007 12:27 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

especially if it's something like sherry. or in your case, jim, cherry Wink
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PostPosted: Wed Sep 12, 2007 6:14 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Jim,

Really like your sound!

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PostPosted: Thu Sep 13, 2007 5:33 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Nice Pipes Jim! The mix of narration styles is good- ...shows a nice range.
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