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Bruce Boardmeister
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Joined: 06 Jun 2005 Posts: 7941 Location: Portland, OR
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Posted: Fri Nov 09, 2007 8:08 am Post subject: Bruce - Narration Demo |
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Your thoughts please.
Bruce Miles - Narration
Many thanks,
Bruce _________________ VO-BB Member #31 Enlisted June, 2005
I'm not a Zoo, but over the years I've played one on radio/TV. . |
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Diane Maggipinto Spreading Snark Worldwide
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Posted: Fri Nov 09, 2007 8:33 am Post subject: |
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bruce ... listening now (mostly for inspiration and as a good start to the day!). lots of range, just-the-best voice.
the end piece with its production elements stands out for me. move it up?
i so like listening to you. _________________ sitting at #8, though not as present as I'd like to be. Hello!
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bobsouer Frequent Flyer
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Posted: Fri Nov 09, 2007 8:37 am Post subject: |
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Bruce,
Simple brilliance, brilliantly displayed. _________________ Be well,
Bob Souer (just think of lemons)
The second nicest guy in voiceover.
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Frank F Fat, Old, and Sassy
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Posted: Fri Nov 09, 2007 8:42 am Post subject: |
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Bruce,
Your demo just doesn't work for me. Can you do a job later today?
Actually, the demo brilliant. This is an example of a true "great" in our industry. Thank you for sharing (I am so jealous),
Toodles
F2 _________________ Be thankful for the bad things in life. They opened your eyes to the good things you weren't paying attention to before. email: thevoice@usa.com |
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mcm Smart Kitteh
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Joined: 10 Dec 2004 Posts: 2600 Location: w. MA, USA
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Posted: Fri Nov 09, 2007 9:22 am Post subject: |
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Bruce, it's awesome. One tiny comment - in the medical one, in the phrase following "keyhole technique" - your word/syllable emphases sound kind of random, as if you're reading the words without understanding them or caring about them. You might slow that one down a bit and say the words more clearly. Apart from that, it's terrific! |
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jrodriguez315 A Hundred Dozen
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Posted: Fri Nov 09, 2007 9:25 am Post subject: |
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mcm wrote: | Bruce, it's awesome. One tiny comment - in the medical one, in the phrase following "keyhole technique" - your word/syllable emphases sound kind of random, as if you're reading the words without understanding them or caring about them. You might slow that one down a bit and say the words more clearly. Apart from that, it's terrific! |
Man, what a pair of ears on this lady, huh! _________________ Joe Rodriguez, Bilingual Voice Actor | The Voiceover Thespian Blog |
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Bruce Boardmeister
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Posted: Fri Nov 09, 2007 10:49 am Post subject: |
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mcm wrote: | - your word/syllable emphases sound kind of random, as if you're reading the words without understanding them or caring about them. |
Thank you for the compliments. Actually, the client listens carefully to these and this was what they wanted. Doctors are their audience and they prefer a fairly dry read. The phrase that pays is:
"And a cryo-preserved, size-matched, lateral femoral condylar allograft, fixed with Accutrack screws".
All of the big words ahead of allograft are adjectives to allograft, so it is a trick to pick the emphases. For those just dying to know what it all means... working backwards, an allograft is a transplanted part from another body, and it's a bump from the side of a leg bone, it's the right size and it was frozen for your protection. Them medical reads is fun.
B _________________ VO-BB Member #31 Enlisted June, 2005
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Frank F Fat, Old, and Sassy
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Posted: Fri Nov 09, 2007 10:53 am Post subject: |
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I am soooo glad you said that... Quote: | "And a cryo-preserved, size-matched, lateral femoral condylar allograft, fixed with Accutrack screws". | ... and I didn't.
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Bret Guest
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Posted: Tue Nov 13, 2007 12:35 am Post subject: |
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People tell me all the time, "GO LISTEN TO GOOD DEMOS!" / "FIND DEMOS ON VOICEBANK!!!" / "LISTEN TO WHAT'S GOOD AND FIGURE OUT WHY IT'S GOOD!!!" / "SPEAK IN CAPITAL LETTERS AND USE PLENTY OF EXCLAMATION MARKS!!!!!"
The decidedly URGENT nature of these suggestions aside, many of us newbies are left to sift through thousands of VoiceBank demos that may not be so "good." Some of them are decades old, some of them are barely audible, some of them are poorly categorized, some of them are from retired talent, some of them don't make sense, some sound poorly produced. My response to all the suggestions about demos is, "Wait, where are the beautiful demos?"
But I've just had an epiphany! THIS is what people are talking about when they refer to a GREAT demo.
A GREAT demo is something you enjoy listening to! Cheers to that, Bruce! |
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CarynClark MMD
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Posted: Tue Nov 13, 2007 6:27 am Post subject: |
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Bruce.... wow. This is truly a special gift you have!
Bret - you might want to listen to demos from certain agents on voicebank... such as those from Atlas Talent and Vox in LA. _________________ Caryn Clark... The Hip Chick Voice!
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todd ellis A Zillion
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Posted: Tue Nov 13, 2007 7:29 am Post subject: |
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i'm not worthy ...
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Rognog Flight Attendant
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Posted: Tue Nov 13, 2007 8:30 am Post subject: |
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When I grow up, I wanna be Bruce Miles! _________________ Tom Dheere - The "H" is Silent, but I'm Not!
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BenWils The Thirteenth Floor
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Posted: Wed Nov 21, 2007 7:50 pm Post subject: |
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Great demo Bruce! Just a shade long in my honest opinion, but when it's a good as your voice is, people will keep listening. _________________ Ben
"To be really good at voiceover, you need to improve your footwork and hip snap." |
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Craig Been Here Awhile
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Posted: Wed Nov 21, 2007 9:54 pm Post subject: Wow.... |
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I know you want criticism, but wow....I can't help ya!
That's fantastic.
Really great Bruce.
Craig |
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