VO-BB - 20 YEARS OLD!

Donovan · Posted: Wed Mar 12, 2008 7:23 pm Post subject: New Commecial Demo Draft

Hey folks! I just finished up with the "rough draft" of my new commercial demo. This is not a final mix, so the levels may be a bit off, but I'd like to know what you guys think. The link is below. And PLEASE don't shy away from any criticism (or kudos Wink

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Thanks for listening!

http://www.doncopro.com/voiceofcool/0308commdemodraft.mp3
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bobsouer · Posted: Thu Mar 13, 2008 11:30 am Post subject:

Donovan,

At least on my office headphones, the music seems to be mixed too hot with some of the clips. Good performances on your part, though.
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louzucaro · Posted: Thu Mar 13, 2008 1:59 pm Post subject:

I agree with Bob...vocal should be hotter...right now it's a bit of work to hear the vocal over the rest of it.

Also, there's something about the vocal that sounds a bit muffled to me.

I like the mixture of vocal styles you've got on here, and I think your "natural delivery" is really nice!
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Donovan · Posted: Thu Mar 13, 2008 2:10 pm Post subject:

Thanks for the input guys! Like I said, I knew the levels would be a little off... but I didn't realize I made it hard to hear the voice. I'm actually working on revising some of the spots completely, but wanted to get feedback on my various deliveries. I'll post the new version when complete (probably sometime in 2 weeks or so.

Thanks again!
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