VO-BB - 20 YEARS OLD!

louzucaro · Posted: Thu Jun 19, 2008 9:49 pm Post subject: Today's cannot say

It wasn't really the saying as much as the breathing that got me the first time...

"The page will show the physician that [product] is the #1 acid-suppressing agent among pediatric gastroenterologists, is the first FDA-approved Hobo Tounge

I for kids as young as 12 months, and that pediatricians alone have written over 4 million prescriptions for [product] in the last 5 years!"

And there was an actual cannot say, too:

"proven symptom improvement"

Tongue gymnasium, here I come!
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Deirdre · Posted: Fri Jun 20, 2008 8:13 am Post subject:

"proven symptom improvement"

yecch!

The other stuff requires great heaving breaths where the commas are, a legato re-entry, and a fine hand editing
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louzucaro · Posted: Fri Jun 20, 2008 7:47 pm Post subject:

I did pretty good on the first two of your points...fortunately, the third was up to somebody who was not me Smile

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Doc · Guest

What the hell were they thinking? I'm doing my radio show right now and our theme weekend is "Classic Vinyl Rewind Weekend" which we have to work in every break.

Whew!

I'm on until 2:00 P.M., MST/ Hobo Laughing

T. If you'd like to see if I can handle it, give a listen: http://www.klpx.com - then, click on "Listen Online" in upper right corner of page.