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Jeffrey Kafer Assistant Zookeeper

Joined: 09 Dec 2006 Posts: 4931 Location: Location, Location!
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Posted: Thu Feb 19, 2009 6:35 pm Post subject: |
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The first thing that I noticed was you really need to enunciate. I'm not exaggerating or trying to rude when I say that you sounded inebriated on the first couple of spots. _________________ Jeff
http://JeffreyKafer.com
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bobsouer Frequent Flyer

Joined: 15 Jul 2006 Posts: 9883 Location: Pittsburgh, PA
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Posted: Thu Feb 19, 2009 7:57 pm Post subject: |
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Cameron,
Jeff has nailed it. There's a fine line to walk between casual, conversational delivery and slurring. Keep working. You're making progress. _________________ Be well,
Bob Souer (just think of lemons)
The second nicest guy in voiceover.
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griffitd Guest
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Posted: Fri Feb 20, 2009 7:09 am Post subject: Thanks! |
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Thanks for the vine gentlemen! I will make it happen!
Mahalos!
Cameron |
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