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2 New Commercial Demos - Which is Best?

 
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Pierce
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PostPosted: Thu Feb 19, 2009 1:11 pm    Post subject: 2 New Commercial Demos - Which is Best? Reply with quote

Howdy!

If you'd be so kind to review, I've got one that's got all kinds of fancy compression and bass boost and separators, and one that doesn't... with a few other differences in content.

Do either sound good (vocally & prod)? Have a favorite? Many Thanks!!

CHADD'S COMMERCIAL DEMO 1

CHADD'S COMMERCIAL DEMO 2
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PostPosted: Thu Feb 19, 2009 1:16 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Overall I liked #1 better. The second cut on it was alittle over processed to my ears though. Also, you miught want to look a the sequencing...some very similar cuts back to back.
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PostPosted: Thu Feb 19, 2009 8:00 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Chadd,

I think there's stuff to like about both, though I'm included to agree with Chuck's comments just above. You have a really nice sound.
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PostPosted: Thu Feb 19, 2009 8:19 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Strong Chadd!! I liked number one best. Maybe put one higher energy/music heavy clip between cuts two and three to break it up.

Very marketable "real guy" sound.
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Pierce
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PostPosted: Fri Feb 20, 2009 8:29 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Guys, that's awesome. Thanks so much for the time. I'm working with THOSE coaches (read: I can't believe it!!!), and have learned of the need to narrowly focus a demo... but as you've added: Without having the same read for :60. Still working at it of course Smile (at least I took out the monster trucks)

HAVE A GREAT WEEKEND!
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PostPosted: Tue Mar 03, 2009 2:29 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Since it's on the same subject, I figure better to post the new NEW demo here than in a new thread. Anyone still willing to donate their ears?

Thanks much!!!

http://piercevoice.com/piercedemos/ChaddPierceCommercials128.mp3
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