VO-BB - 20 YEARS OLD!

Pierce · Last edited by Pierce on Wed Sep 16, 2009 8:25 am; edited 1 time in total

REVIEWING... sorry.
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Jeffrey Kafer · Posted: Tue Sep 15, 2009 4:17 pm Post subject:

It isn't pass/fail.

AAA - pass. This sounds like your money voice. I'm guessing it's also *you*. Coincidence? I think not.
Spongebob - didn't believe it, sorry. Plus I was distracted by your "dis" for "this".
Whirpool - I was distracted by your dropping of the ends of words: "Away" and "chore". Plus you're trying too hard to be relaxed on the product name. It felt off, almost too slow.
Rubios - I like it.
McDonalds - good until you dropped the end of a word again.
Recycle - Fine, but doesn't stand out as great.
Dish - You seem to slur "Switch" and "dish". Clean those up and you'll have a good spot.
Smart Ones - I had to listen to it twice to pick up the "Smart ones". You're being paid to advertise their product. Make sure you hit it. Once you do that, this might be a good lead off spot.
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Pierce · Posted: Wed Sep 16, 2009 7:14 am Post subject:

Good stuff, Jeff-- thanks! I gotta have more... Anyone? Anywhere? C'mon, don't hold back!! Lay it down! Pump it up! Then hop criticizingly in a sideways left and right direction... then do the hokey pokey.... alright, now turn yourself around....
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