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Keep On Keepin' On with a New Character Demo

 
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Lance Blair
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PostPosted: Thu Dec 03, 2009 1:21 pm    Post subject: Keep On Keepin' On with a New Character Demo Reply with quote

Thanks for all the input I got last time I posted a character demo here (which is still up at lanceblair.net for reference).

Here's a new draft, and I'd appreciate your input.

http://www.lanceblair.net/sharing/LanceBlairCharacter.mp3
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Bruce
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PostPosted: Fri Dec 04, 2009 7:57 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Very, very good! The only thing I'd adjust would be bringing the voice in the last piece a bit more forward. It's a bit lost in the effects.

I hope you're sending this to some folks at Cartoon Network down the road from you.

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Lance Blair
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PostPosted: Fri Dec 04, 2009 8:38 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Thanks Bruce! As for the last bit the voice is a touch lost because it was mixed for a Haunted House, so it's SFX heavy. I'll see if I can EQ it better or perhaps re-record it because I have the music bed.

It's :53 so far, the plan was to then throw in one or two quicker clips showing extreme emotion at a more frantic pace.

Edit: Okay, here's draft #2:

http://www.lanceblair.net/sharing/LanceBlairCharacter2.mp3
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PostPosted: Fri Dec 04, 2009 5:06 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Better yet! Go forth and multiply (yourself)!

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PostPosted: Fri Dec 04, 2009 6:53 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Lance,

I can't add anything to what Bruce said except to say I'm mighty impressed. Excellent work.
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