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PostPosted: Tue Mar 31, 2009 8:14 am    Post subject: Critique my demo? Thank you. Reply with quote

http://sound-creative.com/MarkDuran.htm
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PostPosted: Tue Mar 31, 2009 9:03 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

It's fine, get out there and sell yourself.
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PostPosted: Tue Mar 31, 2009 9:17 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Hi Philip,

Thanks for the critique and encouragement. BTW, what did you think of the art? Just wondering. Thanks again. Much appreciated.

Best,

Mark
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PostPosted: Tue Mar 31, 2009 1:09 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Very nice demo. You could cut it to a minute and still get as much work.

Re: the site, it's minimalist, but at this beginning stage (I'm guessing you're beginning as a freelancer, but have experience from elsewhere) that may be all you need right now. As I think I've said here before, your website can be people's first impression of who and what you are, and if you're satisfied that it says what needs to be said, then so be it.

I'd consider also offering your demo as an mp3 download for those who wish to present your demo to others.

Have fun!

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PostPosted: Tue Mar 31, 2009 10:24 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Artwork.

I've seen better... and worse.
Yours leans toward the "mo" better part.
I see a name and two means of contact.
... but looking at that, the demo not withstanding, what tells me on this website that this person in a voice actor?
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PostPosted: Thu Apr 02, 2009 8:03 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Thank you everyone for your pertinent comments. I am just starting out and look forward to learning more and more as I go along. I am considering other designs and concepts for the CD cover and website. This is just a first attempt. Thanks again for taking the time to check out my demo.

Mark
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