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Demo (of sorts) for your critique, my first shot at this...

 
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georgethetech
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PostPosted: Mon Jun 29, 2009 12:07 am    Post subject: Demo (of sorts) for your critique, my first shot at this... Reply with quote

It's not what you think...

http://idisk.mac.com/eldorec/Public/Testimonial-50sec_MusicV2.mp3

Does the music help or hurt?
Is it cut too tight?

I plan to use this to help promote ERS to agencies.
Exactly how, you might ask?
Stay tuned...
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Don G.
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PostPosted: Mon Jun 29, 2009 5:50 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

I like the idea and I like the music, but there are times I think the music fights too much with what's being said, so I might bring it down a tad.

Nice overall, though.
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Bruce
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PostPosted: Mon Jun 29, 2009 9:26 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

I agree with Don, the music fights with the voices quite a bit. Also I'd consider splitting the voices apart just a bit...take 55 seconds in stead of 50, or whatever it is. Too much "dog pile on the rabbit" for me.

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PostPosted: Tue Jun 30, 2009 9:17 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

This is fantastic... I thought the music was fine, but I would definitely space them just a tad... what about Cip?
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PostPosted: Tue Jun 30, 2009 10:34 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

i not only thought the music was fine (listening through headphones - AKG K240) - i liked the pacing too. jmho
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PostPosted: Sat Jul 11, 2009 11:19 am    Post subject: testimonial clip Reply with quote

I liked it although I thought the music was a tad higher volume than needed so the voices had to compete..specifically the women. It might be my tinn ear too! but that was what I got from it. I did like the concept .

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Mandy Nelson
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PostPosted: Mon Jul 20, 2009 1:01 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

George, what a great idea! I agree that the music should be pulled back a bit but overall it hits the spot.

edited to add: I wish I had more audio help just so I could say I could ERS to help!
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melissa eX
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PostPosted: Sun Aug 02, 2009 8:45 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I think it's great! I'd also bring the music down just a hair - but the pacing doesn't bother me at all.
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