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georgethetech The Gates of Troy

Joined: 18 Mar 2007 Posts: 1878 Location: Topanga, CA
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Posted: Mon Jun 29, 2009 12:07 am Post subject: Demo (of sorts) for your critique, my first shot at this... |
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It's not what you think...
http://idisk.mac.com/eldorec/Public/Testimonial-50sec_MusicV2.mp3
Does the music help or hurt?
Is it cut too tight?
I plan to use this to help promote ERS to agencies.
Exactly how, you might ask?
Stay tuned... _________________ If it sounds good, it is good.
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Don G. King's Row

Joined: 11 Nov 2004 Posts: 1071 Location: MA
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Posted: Mon Jun 29, 2009 5:50 am Post subject: |
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I like the idea and I like the music, but there are times I think the music fights too much with what's being said, so I might bring it down a tad.
Nice overall, though. |
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Bruce Boardmeister

Joined: 06 Jun 2005 Posts: 7977 Location: Portland, OR
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Posted: Mon Jun 29, 2009 9:26 am Post subject: |
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I agree with Don, the music fights with the voices quite a bit. Also I'd consider splitting the voices apart just a bit...take 55 seconds in stead of 50, or whatever it is. Too much "dog pile on the rabbit" for me.
B _________________ VO-BB Member #31 Enlisted June, 2005
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jrkaiser Guest
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Posted: Tue Jun 30, 2009 9:17 am Post subject: |
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This is fantastic... I thought the music was fine, but I would definitely space them just a tad... what about Cip? |
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todd ellis A Zillion

Joined: 02 Jan 2007 Posts: 10529 Location: little egypt
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Posted: Tue Jun 30, 2009 10:34 am Post subject: |
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i not only thought the music was fine (listening through headphones - AKG K240) - i liked the pacing too. jmho _________________ "i know philip banks": todd ellis
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dscarter1

Joined: 23 May 2009 Posts: 2 Location: Pittsburgh, PA
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Posted: Sat Jul 11, 2009 11:19 am Post subject: testimonial clip |
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I liked it although I thought the music was a tad higher volume than needed so the voices had to compete..specifically the women. It might be my tinn ear too! but that was what I got from it. I did like the concept .
Dave _________________ Be the change you wish to see in the world- gandhi |
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Mandy Nelson MMD

Joined: 07 Aug 2008 Posts: 2914 Location: Wicked Mainah
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Posted: Mon Jul 20, 2009 1:01 pm Post subject: |
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George, what a great idea! I agree that the music should be pulled back a bit but overall it hits the spot.
edited to add: I wish I had more audio help just so I could say I could ERS to help! _________________ 006 member of the Sisterhood of the Traveling Mic. Bonded by sound.
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melissa eX MMD

Joined: 20 Oct 2007 Posts: 2794 Location: Lower Manhattan, New Amsterdam, the original NYC
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Posted: Sun Aug 02, 2009 8:45 pm Post subject: |
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I think it's great! I'd also bring the music down just a hair - but the pacing doesn't bother me at all. |
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