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JD Robertson
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PostPosted: Wed Dec 09, 2009 8:54 am    Post subject: Feedback on my website Reply with quote

HI Everyone!

I would love some feedback on my website if you have the time. The blog is not up and running yet, but everything else is done.

www.jdrobertson.net

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mcm
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PostPosted: Wed Dec 09, 2009 9:36 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Jennifer - I like it very much. It's clean and simple and easy on the eyes. I think this might be the first website I've ever visited that makes me think of creamsicles. Love the colors.

This is a matter of opinion of course, but I don't like bio pages. If you're going to have one I would suggest shortening it and focussing on information that might lead someone to hire you rather than fall asleep.
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Lance Blair
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PostPosted: Wed Dec 09, 2009 9:55 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

I love it love it love it love it! Did I mention that I love it!!!

I'll remember the Genusus developers, they do great work!

I love your demo too...but the alarm clock nearly killed me on my studio monitors. Yikes! Smile
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JD Robertson
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PostPosted: Wed Dec 09, 2009 10:24 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Ouch! Note taken on the bio... I didn't think it was that bad, but I know that I could sell myself more. I wanted to to that without it being too much, but maybe I did too little. I was just trying to keep everything fun and light...

Thanks for the feedback so far... Hope for and look forward to any other thoughts.

Genusus aka Lou Zucaro ROCKS!! I think many of you already know of his fabulousness Laugh
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Bailey
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PostPosted: Wed Dec 09, 2009 5:02 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Definitely creamsicles. My 2nd thought... Wow! a VO website without a microphone.
Very well put together.
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Mandy Nelson
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PostPosted: Wed Dec 09, 2009 9:00 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Oh, I love the layout! It is very refreshing and unique for VO. When will the blog link work? Until then, it should lead to a great "not up yet" page.
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bobsouer
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PostPosted: Thu Dec 10, 2009 12:00 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

J.D.,

I don't anything to add beyond what's been said, but I'd like to add my voice to the chorus about what a lovely designed site you have. As for the blog, I would have no link to it at all until you're ready to roll it out.
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captain54
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Joined: 30 Jan 2006
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PostPosted: Mon Dec 14, 2009 4:10 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Greetings from another Chi Town Vo talent and another alumni of Bosco's VO classes..

I think the problem with the bio page is that is could be edited. I honestly don't think people are gonna take the time to read that much copy. It seems like it kinda goes on and on. I'm sure it's very well thought out on your part, but from my experience on my own page, people read a couple of paragraphs and that's it.

I would try to pick the highlights and the elements that really make you stand out apart from another VO talent...and just go with that.

thats being kind of nit picky though, because the rest is great.
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