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kkline · Posted: Wed Jul 18, 2012 8:00 am Post subject: Changed the order - any better?

Using some of the feedback from my original post last Thursday I changed the order of the elements on my demo to try to separate the elements that sounded too similar.

Wasn't sure if I needed to start a new thread or keep going with the old - sorry if I've breached etiquette here.

Anyway, if people still have the time and energy to listen to this version of my demo and provide feedback, I'd appreciate it! I'm not sure which one would be the better one to go with, or if more work is still needed -

New one is here: https://dl.dropbox.com/u/45174091/CommercialVODemo7.18.12.mp3

Original one is here: https://dl.dropbox.com/u/45174091/CommercialVODemo7.10.12.mp3

Thanks!
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Chuck Davis · Posted: Fri Jul 27, 2012 4:12 am Post subject:

Better Kevie. I'd move the auto collision and Ram Trucks up in the order. You've got a lot of the same sound now in the middle.
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kkline · Posted: Fri Jul 27, 2012 1:59 pm Post subject:

Chuck -

Thanks for listening to the new version and posting suggestions. I'll do a little more tweaking.

Have a great wknd!!

Kevin
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