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Depthpersuasion
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PostPosted: Wed Sep 12, 2012 9:24 am    Post subject: Video Game Demo Reply with quote
Alright, my friends, be raw and brutal. Your time is appreciated:

http://soundcloud.com/depthpersuasion/daniel-pierces-interactive


Thanks guys,

Daniel Pierce
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Bob Bergen
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PostPosted: Wed Sep 12, 2012 12:28 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote
You work is brilliant! But the demo is too long and needs to move faster. You can accomplish this with editing as you have plenty of good material here to work with. Great acting and solid characters! Bravo!
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Depthpersuasion
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PostPosted: Wed Sep 12, 2012 1:22 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote
Bob, knowing your breadth of work and talent, that means a lot com'n from the source.

I'll spend some more time whittling it down to 90 or under if possible.

Thanks, good sir.

-Daniel
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Depthpersuasion
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PostPosted: Thu Sep 13, 2012 12:48 pm    Post subject: Revision Reply with quote
In case anyone else drops in, here is the new edit coming in at 1:45.

http://soundcloud.com/depthpersuasion/daniel-pierces-character-reel

Thanks again for your time.
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