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Mike Harrison · Posted: Thu May 14, 2015 7:12 am Post subject: Commercial Demo Proposed Recut

I can't be objective about this, so I need feedback, please. Positive and/or negative. On any aspect at all of the (proposed) demo.

Many thanks!

http://mike-harrison.com/150514-MHCommMix1.mp3
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Ed Fisher · Posted: Thu May 14, 2015 8:42 am Post subject:

Since you asked...

For what it's worth (and only you can decide that)

Cuts:

1. Very good...wish it could somehow be shorter although I know you wanted to "complete the thought."

2. Very Good

3. Also Good...but similar in delivery to number 1

4. Not feeling it...weakest cut. IMHO

5. Good. Country-ish sound.

6. Excellent. Promo. Attention getting. Recommend this as first cut.

7. Strong.

All I can give you is my opinion. Whether it makes any sense is up to you. But, I too, understand the difficulty in judging your own performance. I hope this is useful.

I particularly liked that fact that you sounded different on almost all of the cuts. Very nice. Laugh

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FinMac · Posted: Thu May 21, 2015 11:44 pm Post subject: similar thoughts

Agree with Cutter, all good stuff

Would suggest starting with cut no. 3 instead of no.1. Like the emotion in that read and it might be better to get the listener more interested in what follows.
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