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First self-produced demo - telephony

 
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Roar-duh
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PostPosted: Mon Aug 31, 2015 10:03 am    Post subject: First self-produced demo - telephony Reply with quote
I'm working on making a few new demos for myself, and I humbly lay myself bare before the group for critique on my first. I know it's long at 1:43, this leaves me room to cut the weakest track... which I think is the last one.

What are your thoughts? Thanks!

https://soundcloud.com/john-roorda/john-roorda-telephony-demo
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PostPosted: Mon Aug 31, 2015 2:57 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote
Sounding pretty good, John. If it were me, I think I'd replace the RBC Bank segment with the last cut, which is pretty much the same straightforward style, but it has more smile than RBC.
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Roar-duh
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PostPosted: Mon Aug 31, 2015 3:02 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote
Thanks Mike, that means a lot coming from a seasoned pro. I was having kinda the same dilemma but couldn't quite put my finger on it. After I put this together, I did an alternate take of RBC with a bit more pep in its step. I'll put it back together with that new cut, and decide if RBC or Hartigan is on the chopping block.
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