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steveanthony
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Joined: 30 Aug 2006
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PostPosted: Thu Nov 23, 2006 10:49 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote
Rob,

In addition to what's been pointed out previously, I'd seriously consider removing the round tape reel. It looks dated.

Otherwise, it's looking pretty good.
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Rob Ellis
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Joined: 01 Aug 2006
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Location: Detroit
PostPosted: Mon Nov 27, 2006 7:45 am    Post subject: Reply with quote
Thanks everybody, I think these suggestions are quite helpful. And Bailey, I will probably use one of the phrases you suggested.

So when I'm rich and famous, you can all say, "Are you kidding, I helped him put together his first website!" Rolls Eyes
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