VO-BB - 20 YEARS OLD!

Al Moulliet · Posted: Fri Mar 31, 2017 7:14 am Post subject: Big Boy Pants Time

Okay,

It's time to hear what the people think, I can't fix it if I can't get in their heads.
Do they like it or not, is it interesting?

Hit me.

https://www.moullietvoicepro.com

Bruce · Posted: Fri Mar 31, 2017 8:26 am Post subject:

Well, keep working at it. The educational demo had odd pacing and a diction trip early on that shouldn't have been left in, and the music was too loud and maybe unneeded. The commercial demo was just one piece and why a thunderstorm for a background? The read drifted between natural and not natural. Got to work on those acting chops.

You didn't ask directly for comments on the site but I'll say it appears huge and too full of stuff for someone new to the biz.

Onward!

B
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Al Moulliet · Posted: Fri Mar 31, 2017 5:47 pm Post subject:

Bruce, Thanks for the critique. I should have known that you would choose that demo example to pick out. It has been on my list of things to change on my site. I guess it just moved to the top of the list.

Thanks again
Al

Philip Banks · Posted: Sat Apr 01, 2017 12:47 am Post subject:

You knew! YOU noticed! That's a good thing.

Friday night - Monday morning.

Go to bed on Friday night thrilled with you new demos! Enjoy your weekend. On Monday morning listen again with a box of Kleenex tissues standing by as you, like most of us, respond "Oh no! OH DEAR ME NOOOOOOOO!"

craigsvoicetalent · Posted: Sun Apr 02, 2017 10:13 am Post subject:

Your commercial demo is taken straight from Edge Studio's script library and it is one of the most common one's submitted on the peer to peer review forum that they have.
This is usually frowned upon. Take the advice of many on this forum and look for unique copy that will highlight your skills.
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Al Moulliet · Posted: Sun Apr 02, 2017 3:07 pm Post subject:

Thanks guys,

I have taken the wise words of critique and made changes to what I was offering.
I appreciate the help, and look forward to contributing to the community.

Al