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Tre M. Backstage Pass

Joined: 01 Nov 2017 Posts: 489 Location: Vegas, the desert part.
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Bruce Boardmeister

Joined: 06 Jun 2005 Posts: 7973 Location: Portland, OR
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I haven’t listened to popular and urban radio much in the past several years but I’m betting your chatty, sassy, cool conversational sound will be big with some stations. My only critique, and it’s a small one, is your pitch and tone are pretty similar in the first several clips and then you show variety later on. Can you mix it up a little and still be so “hot”? Ah, and can you cut the songs down a titch? If you can’t I get it. I just wanna hear every bit of you I can!
B _________________ VO-BB Member #31 Enlisted June, 2005
I'm not a Zoo, but over the years I've played one on radio/TV. . |
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Foog DC

Joined: 27 Oct 2013 Posts: 608 Location: Upper Canuckistan
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The whole thing sounds good: you sounded great, lots of momentum, slick editing, but when everything else dropped out and it was only you talking around 1:10... THAT was superlative. _________________ Andrew Fogarasi
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Lance Blair M&M

Joined: 03 Jun 2007 Posts: 2281 Location: Atlanta
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Awesome. _________________ Skype: globalvoiceover
and now, http://lanceblairvo.com the blog is there now too! |
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audio'connell T-Shirt

Joined: 02 Feb 2005 Posts: 1963 Location: in a dark studio with a single bulb light...day after day after....
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Nice job! _________________ - Peter
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Tre M. Backstage Pass

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Bob Bergen CM
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I find it 90% outstanding.
It's too long. And that laundry list of artists is what drags much of it. But overall it needs a tighter edit. There's a music button at the beginning of each byte which just slows the whole thing down. Granted, imaging is very produced. But the music sfx sting a the top of each byte highlights your producer, not you. I think all this needs is some editing and tightening. |
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