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Bailey 4 Large

Joined: 04 Jun 2005 Posts: 4336 Location: Lake San Marcos... north of Connie, northwest of the Best.
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Posted: Sat Mar 17, 2007 12:07 pm Post subject: spec proposal |
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I put this spec ad together as a proposal to our church. It’s not supposed to sound like a commercial or an infomercial.
I thought I'd run it up the flagpole and see if it catches the wind.
PC2007
It's a bit long... 62 seconds. _________________ "Bailey"
a.k.a. Jim Sutton
Retired... Every day is Saturday, except Sunday.
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dagoldenknight86 Guest
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Posted: Sat Mar 17, 2007 6:38 pm Post subject: |
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Where is this supposed to get play and what's the target demo? I think the music was a little too busy and distracting... I'm anal when it comes to music though. |
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bobsouer Frequent Flyer

Joined: 15 Jul 2006 Posts: 9883 Location: Pittsburgh, PA
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Posted: Sat Mar 17, 2007 9:36 pm Post subject: |
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Bailey,
I had a similar reaction to the music. It seemed a bit distracting to me. Your voiceover is nicely understated. _________________ Be well,
Bob Souer (just think of lemons)
The second nicest guy in voiceover.
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Bailey 4 Large

Joined: 04 Jun 2005 Posts: 4336 Location: Lake San Marcos... north of Connie, northwest of the Best.
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Posted: Mon Mar 19, 2007 2:55 pm Post subject: |
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So much for the spec... someone beat me to the punch. It's all good.
Thanks again for the critiques...
The Punch
Sounds a bit over processed, but a good presentation. _________________ "Bailey"
a.k.a. Jim Sutton
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