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Don Hammock Been Here Awhile

Joined: 31 May 2005 Posts: 225 Location: Beaumont/Port Arthur,Tx
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Posted: Mon Apr 02, 2007 5:11 am Post subject: Having hard time posting link |
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If I can get this to post-please give inputs-good,bad, or ugly.Thanks ,Don
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Hart Assistant Asylum Chief

Joined: 03 Jan 2006 Posts: 2107 Location: Foley, AL
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Posted: Mon Apr 02, 2007 6:20 am Post subject: |
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Don,
Given the subject material I would like to hear you be a bit more conversational. It's just a little too obvious you are reading from a script. Think of it this way, you're having a very important, but a little awkward conversation with a close friend. Other than that, the reads are upbeat, friendly, warm, and compassionate. I think you hit the tone just right.
Technically, since it's for the web I'd like to hear the bottom end cleaned up a little bit. Maybe use EQ to roll off some of the bass and put a little more oomph in the upper-middle range. I think I'd turn the music down just a skosh. I say that only because the of the likelihood of clients with impaired hearing.
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