VO-BB - 20 YEARS OLD!

[Fran McClellan]

Hi everyone!

I've put off updating my narration demo long enough . My original demo was done in 2003 and I'm sick of it to the point that I don't even like sending it out anymore, so...I made a new one based on actual work. I'd love some input before I start replacing the old one on the Interwebs.

Also, I'm not sure if I should call it a narration demo. It's a mix between web explainers, in-store videos, and exhibit narration.

New one (first draft):
https://soundcloud.com/franmcclellan/fran-mcclellan-narration-demo/s-m9Bjr

Here's the old one in case you want to hear a comparison:
https://soundcloud.com/franmcclellan/narration-demo

Thanks in advance!!
Fran
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[Scott Pollak]

Fran, I'm not sure I've even heard your voice before and I just love it. You seem to have a 'timeless' voice age that can stretch from young and trendy on up to dependable mom.

I like the demo, but the ONLY very, very minor recommendation I'd make is to maybe swap out byte #2 with #3. As you went from the first cut to the second, the delivery and pacing was SO SIMILAR it didn't really showcase range. As I was listening to the second cut, I was thinking "Hmmm, wish I heard a SMILE in her voice" and then, voila, as if on cue, there was that smile in your third byte. I think we need to hear THAT, and the variety it brings with it, a bit sooner.

Other than that....... You are a delight to listen to!
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[Fran McClellan]

Thanks so much for the kind words and the feedback, Scott...I appreciate it

I hear what you are saying now (that's why a second set of ears is always great!) and am going to make that change. Thanks!!

Fran
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[FinMac]

+1 on what Scott wrote.

You have one of those voices that are very easy to listen to. Nice job!

All the best,

Mac
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[Fran McClellan]

Thanks Mac!
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[Lance Blair]

Yeah Fran, this rocks. It might be Corporate Narration, and it's a blend of e-learning and explainer.

I'd call it "Dress Casual Corporate". Whatever it is, it's great!
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[Ed Fisher]

Yep. I like the new one much better.

Much fuller sounding.

I think your voice has matured a bit.

Delicious Ear Candy.

(are you using a different mic?)
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[roger]

Well, since I'm not much of an expert on anything, I can't give you
much constructive criticism.
But, I do know what I like and I likes your voice and presentation.
I believe I could listen to you reading the phone directory ( remember those?).
Say there's and idea. Include a selection from the directory. No?
Nice demo, kiddo.
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[Fran McClellan]

Thanks guys...really appreciate the kind words

"Dress Casual Corporate" - I LOVE it!!

Clutter...the first one was done in a studio in 2003 when I was first starting out and the second is comprised of actual work, but yes...different mic too
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