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Timothy



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PostPosted: Tue Jan 14, 2014 9:59 am    Post subject: My Narration Demo Reply with quote

Feedback is most welcome. Thanks!

https://soundcloud.com/timothybrazeal/timothy-brazeal-narration

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Chuck Davis
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PostPosted: Tue Jan 14, 2014 10:30 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Great sound! You really have that warm, mature thing going there. I like the variety as well. It's all your brand, but the colors change nicely.
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FinMac
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PostPosted: Tue Jan 14, 2014 11:45 pm    Post subject: Nicely done! Reply with quote

Love the variety and different tones on the demo. Only thing I would comment on is the length. If you can knock it down to a 60 that would work better.

Well done!

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Bruce
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PostPosted: Wed Jan 15, 2014 7:17 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

What a distinct and marketable range of deliveries you have. Well done. And I think 1:30 is a fine length for narration demos. You need more time to show what you've got.

A tiny thing, but in some clips it sounds like the lower frequencies of your voice are diminished through your mic or an EQ setting. To hear the full range of your voice might be a bit more frosting on this cake.

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PostPosted: Wed Jan 15, 2014 7:18 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Agreed. Narration demo's tend to be longer than Commercial or Promo.
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Timothy



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PostPosted: Thu Jan 16, 2014 8:35 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Thank you all for the comments! I have been considering changing the sequence as the first 2 clips are not what I think are the best or most reflective of my talents. However my main concern is; will this be a demo that can help me to book work?

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Chuck Davis
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PostPosted: Thu Jan 16, 2014 8:52 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

I don't think I'd change a thing.

You sound very bookable.

Getting it into the right hands, agents or production houses, is next.
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WillMWatt
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PostPosted: Thu Jan 16, 2014 10:41 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

I love your voice, and I love this demo.

Narration demos are often quite hard to stop from sounding "samey", but each section in yours is clearly defined and suitably different. Bravo!
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