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Timothy

Joined: 05 Nov 2013 Posts: 11 Location: The third cornfield on the right
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Chuck Davis M&M

Joined: 02 Feb 2005 Posts: 2389 Location: Where I love to be...Between the Vineyards and the Cows.
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Posted: Tue Jan 14, 2014 10:30 am Post subject: |
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Great sound! You really have that warm, mature thing going there. I like the variety as well. It's all your brand, but the colors change nicely. _________________ Wicked huge.....in India.
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FinMac Lucky 700

Joined: 14 Jan 2013 Posts: 707 Location: In a really cool place...Finland!
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Posted: Tue Jan 14, 2014 11:45 pm Post subject: Nicely done! |
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Love the variety and different tones on the demo. Only thing I would comment on is the length. If you can knock it down to a 60 that would work better.
Well done!
Mac _________________ www.scottsvoiceover.com - An American voice in Finland
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Bruce Boardmeister

Joined: 06 Jun 2005 Posts: 7977 Location: Portland, OR
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Posted: Wed Jan 15, 2014 7:17 am Post subject: |
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What a distinct and marketable range of deliveries you have. Well done. And I think 1:30 is a fine length for narration demos. You need more time to show what you've got.
A tiny thing, but in some clips it sounds like the lower frequencies of your voice are diminished through your mic or an EQ setting. To hear the full range of your voice might be a bit more frosting on this cake.
B _________________ VO-BB Member #31 Enlisted June, 2005
I'm not a Zoo, but over the years I've played one on radio/TV. .
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Chuck Davis M&M

Joined: 02 Feb 2005 Posts: 2389 Location: Where I love to be...Between the Vineyards and the Cows.
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Posted: Wed Jan 15, 2014 7:18 am Post subject: |
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Agreed. Narration demo's tend to be longer than Commercial or Promo. _________________ Wicked huge.....in India.
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Timothy

Joined: 05 Nov 2013 Posts: 11 Location: The third cornfield on the right
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Posted: Thu Jan 16, 2014 8:35 am Post subject: |
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Thank you all for the comments! I have been considering changing the sequence as the first 2 clips are not what I think are the best or most reflective of my talents. However my main concern is; will this be a demo that can help me to book work?
Timothy |
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Chuck Davis M&M

Joined: 02 Feb 2005 Posts: 2389 Location: Where I love to be...Between the Vineyards and the Cows.
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Posted: Thu Jan 16, 2014 8:52 am Post subject: |
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I don't think I'd change a thing.
You sound very bookable.
Getting it into the right hands, agents or production houses, is next. _________________ Wicked huge.....in India.
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WillMWatt Contributor IV

Joined: 10 Dec 2013 Posts: 138 Location: New York, NY
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Posted: Thu Jan 16, 2014 10:41 am Post subject: |
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I love your voice, and I love this demo.
Narration demos are often quite hard to stop from sounding "samey", but each section in yours is clearly defined and suitably different. Bravo! |
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