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CarynClark
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PostPosted: Wed Mar 05, 2008 9:31 am    Post subject: DING! Round 2.... Reply with quote

Ok, here are the spiffied designs based on feedback I gave the designer. He was awesome... went through each design, explained why he used the font, color, etc. he did, etc. Based on feedback received, the majority liked the concept of the first design, and so we agreed to expand on that.

He also had another concept come to him while doing this, which he's also included. Clever!! Now I can't choose!

Also, feedback on fonts would be appreciated. He's given examples of fonts on the back page that he feels will replicate onto other mediums well - in other words, will be legible if the logo is smaller, etc.

THANKS for your thoughts!!!

2295_HC_logoConcepts_3_5[1].pdf (97.3 KB bytes) => http://www.onlinefilefolder.com/index.php?action=getshare&type=0&user_num=35678&share_id=190907&hash=9e6bf3dd09ec48fe5c510e2843deee7a
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PostPosted: Wed Mar 05, 2008 10:02 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Caryn,

I like page 3 the best.
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PostPosted: Wed Mar 05, 2008 10:12 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

I'm with Bob on this one. Page 3 definitely got my attention.
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PostPosted: Wed Mar 05, 2008 10:22 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

I like the #1... a hip chick, standing out above the crowd...
But #3... says something new and different is "breaking out of the shell".
So... #3 has my vote.
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PostPosted: Wed Mar 05, 2008 10:54 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

for what it's worth, i'd go with #3, but keep the faint reflection of the mic grill on the eggshell.

of course, my opinion and a dollar will get you a cup of coffee if you're not too picky where you buy it.
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PostPosted: Wed Mar 05, 2008 11:05 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

well I have to go number 3 as well. It's got all the elements.
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PostPosted: Wed Mar 05, 2008 12:30 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I like #3 too!
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PostPosted: Wed Mar 05, 2008 3:56 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Well for somebody who posted a picture of a "slutty" (ahem) space girl previously, I'm gonna go against the grain and say that I actually prefer #1 at this point.

First, as DB mentioned with regard to something I'd done on my new website, I think the leg going off to the right tends to draw the eye away from the rest of the logo in #3, but with that said, I like the positioning of elements in #3 better than #4, so I'm not sure I'd "fix" that issue by suggesting you go with #4.

But I just kinda feel like that particular leg and shoe, together, are very "glam" and "showgirly" and since the rest of the person isn't attached to the leg, there isn't anything else to go on to suggest any contradictory vibe.

So if that's accurate...if you come across as 'glam' and 'showgirly'...then I think it fits, but if not, maybe it's something to consider / tweak if that ends up being your favorite.

Just my thoughts.
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PostPosted: Wed Mar 05, 2008 5:11 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I really appreciate all of these comments.

I have to share my husband's comments. It was my big chuckle for the day. He said:

"hmmm. A fat, redneck bird...a Barbara Bush bird...or a whore hatching out of an egg??? It's so hard to choose...."

I'm still laughing at that!!!! Funny guy.

That said, though, I really am leaning toward #1 or #3. If #1, then the boots need to be a little different and I'm not sure of the significance of two stars on the head - one will do, Ithink. If #3, I think I'd like the leg to look a little more delicate. Or maybe an arm with a mic or something? I dunno.

I really do appreciate ALL comments... no right or wrong answers here. Please weigh in if you have time!!!! THANKS!!!!
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PostPosted: Thu Mar 06, 2008 9:42 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Yeah....#3 for me too. I like the Ho hatching out Wink
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PostPosted: Thu Mar 06, 2008 12:06 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Number One is #1!
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PostPosted: Thu Mar 06, 2008 3:55 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

allensco wrote:
Yeah....#3 for me too. I like the Ho hatching out Wink


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PostPosted: Thu Mar 06, 2008 4:09 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Oh.. that is precious!
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PostPosted: Fri Mar 07, 2008 8:08 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

I definitely think #1 is memorable and will get an immediate and fun reaction from viewers. Yes, either a regular eye or maybe a slightly sexy eyelash would be better than the stars.

I also like the top two type styles on the fifth page because the curve of the letter K enforces the look of the boot.

Fun.

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PostPosted: Fri Mar 07, 2008 9:04 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

I completely agree with Bruce on selection #1 and for the reasons he states. I also dig the boots...maybe some stellato's?....We won't go there..ok?
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